Just Keep Holding On

Just keep holding on

I know to you, the world doesn't feel right
I know, you gave up, you gave up the fight
I know, to you, the world is your enemy
I know, you feel, you feel you'll never be free

Chorus

So Just keep holding on...
the nights almost over...
soon will come the dawn
Just keep holding on...
relinquish all your sorrow...
pray to make it to tomorrow
Just keep holding on, 
The future will be brighter
Just keep holding on
The sun will always rise again
So Just keep holding on
Just keep holding on


I know, how you feel,
like the world is coming to an end
I know how you feel,
Like you haven't got a friend
I know how you feel,
Like everything goes so wrong
I know how you feel,
You don't feel very strong
I know how you feel,
you feel like you don't belong.

So just keep holding on
Just keep holding


Chorus

So just keep holding on...
the nights almost over,
soon will come the dawn...
Just keep holding on
relinquish all your sorrow,
pray to make it to tomorrow
Just keep holding on...
The future will be brighter
Just keep holding on...
The sun will always rise again
So Just keep holding on
Just keep holding on

John Derek Hamilton
January 28,2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Capitano Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Way to go John, POTD and a memorable song.
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Thanks Phil, was a nice surprise!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Congrats on this being POTD. Would like to hear the song. Please send a link. Thanks. :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Sure...:))
Hamilton Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 12:31 PM
No song yet, but a melody that kind of fits, check out sade paradise on you tube. Thanks Sunita.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 2:05 AM
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Hamilton Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Keith
Manassian Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Superb. Congrats on POTD with this uplifting piece. It soothes the soul. Yes...I will keep holding on. Blessings.
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Thanks Eileen, you are gracious.
Locraft Iii Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 7:45 PM
I was in an upset mood when I came to this poem. "I know, you gave up. . ." meant to me that I am not trying in life and I took that as a criticism. But I really don't think I have given up, in fact I am doing the darn best I can. You say many times, "I know how you feel. . ." which of course is good, perhaps it's compassion. But I felt a little challenged by that line. I just am not feeling agreeable. Maybe I am going through a bad time. It's not easy to read about.
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Sorry you feel that way, the song references someone who has given up the fight, can be taken many ways, in one aspect of life or in life in general. Since I don't know you, I would suggest you not take it personally. Thanks for visiting and commenting, hope you have a better day.
Williams Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:20 PM
I'm most impress with the best. You've hit on the head. A seven to you. Just keep holding too.
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:31 PM
Thanks Marilyn, much appreciated.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:58 PM
Congrats John on POTD; well deserved!
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Thanks Keith
Turner Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Back to say kudos on POTD, John. Nicely done my friend:)
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Hey Danny, thanks for the nod, was a nice surprise!
Horn Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 10:54 AM
JDH, Truly, honestly and really outstanding; Never requires any polishing or sanding. JTH
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Made me laugh, Thanks James, am pleased you liked it. JDH
Wanter Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Standing ovation!!!! I'll use it as my mantra today!
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Wow ok thanks!
Kamble Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Beautiful lyric. :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Thanks a lot Shubham.
Smith Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Some terrific lyrics John... Someone needs to put these I the radio.... Congratulations
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:32 PM
Yeah, one day...one day, maybe. Thanks Tim
Krampe Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 7:07 AM
May it be so, John. Thank you for this encouraging poem to start my day. Fave! Congrats on POTD. Agnes
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Agnes, was a nice surprise!
Downing  Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:21 AM
What a beautiful and inspiring lyrics. Fabulous morning read I enjoyed it a lot. Congratulation John :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Akkina
Smith Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Back to congratulate you, with no surprise, for POTD honors. Well done my friend...
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Charlie, this one felt good as it flowed!
Y. Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 5:11 AM
Hi John, Great lyrics. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Alexis, was a nice surprise!
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:46 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. John ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Daniel Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:33 AM
Hi John, so glad to see this meaningful and inspiring lyric honoured with POTD:) congratulations:) adding another 7:)
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Jo, was a pleasant surprise, all glory to God.
Daniel Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 5:03 AM
I have felt like this many a time and God and His Word has been the rock to which I hold on, John:) this lyric touched me:) thank you:) a 7:)
Hamilton Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Thanks Jo
Sands Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Excellent John, Just excellent . A favorite :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Thanks Heidi, much appreciated the comment and the fave, made my day!
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Reminds me of the song Morning After from the Poseidon Adventure. Great song! Cool write John:)
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Danny, that was Maureen Mcgovern I think, great song, great movie. lately the lyrics are flowing I had a dry spell for a month or so, but now full flow!
Smith Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:08 AM
The lyric master strikes again. Well done John. Do you play guitar or piano? Have you set any of these to music? You should...
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 10:51 AM
I play a few instruments, have melodies to some of my songs, if you check out Mark Massey he has one of my lyrics put to music it's quite good, thanks for the visit Charlie!
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