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Yeah I know it feels weird But it's too beautiful to be bad Now it's scary cos it might be a masquerade If we happen to be more than what we are Now that's cos we have become more than I can describe No one understands when I sing all that jazz It's already more than the music for mature minds They go with the sarcastic reply "Just friends, yeah right" And then I am lost in my definition A new synonym is added in its oxymoron She has become my doubted confidante But only to the minds who refuse to see If am gonna kick that bucket, it's definitely not your water in it

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Date: 3/17/2016 8:52:00 AM
Greetings Osita. Welcome to Poetry Soup, and congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 12:44:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Osita :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:25:00 PM
Osita, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/12/2016 8:22:00 AM
Osita, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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