Just Down the Road

Just Down the Road


It always seemed to be just down the road,
just out of reach.  It fed a longing, a need,
to travel, if only on the clouds.  So much
seemed so far away then.  That which
was close we wished to be far away from.
Strange how that works, that longing to
explore the unknown, thinking that we know
the known.  I told them I was just going
“down the road”, not knowing where or
what lay in its path.  A vagabond heading
for another place, ”just down the road”,
searching for another reason to believe
that something awaited.  I wonder would
I be as full, or empty, if I had never gone
“just down the road”?  I sit in the same
spot now, weary, wondering, my head
once again in the clouds.  Everything is
somehow – differently - the same.  The
names, the faces, the weathered buildings,
and the dream of “just down the road”.


John G. Lawless
5/5/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 16, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Hi John, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Nice to see this one on the winning list again, JOHN, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:59 PM
such a deep write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Thanks Jan as always for you interest and input.
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:49 PM
I recall this great poem from my "Just Down The Road" contest and I enjoyed seeing it once again, John. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
Lawless Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:43 PM
Kelly thanks for all the wonderful contest themes you have presented for our muse's interpretation. It's been fun.
A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Amazing win John....SKAT
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:45 AM
thanks, always nice to hear from you regarding the contests.
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:05 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, John
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, as always, for reading and commenting on the poems.
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:01 AM
really deep, john.. big cheers on your win!.. huggs
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Nette, I had some fun with this one as it was a very interesting prompt. Congrats on your placement also
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Your poem was very thought-provoking, and it leaves the reader with the question of, what if? A great write, John! Congrats on your win!
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Perhaps I leaned a little toward Mr Frost's "road less traveled" with this one. but then again "it made all the difference".
Gibson Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Very good, John...Also, "Hell's Empty" Quite thought provoking.
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Thanks for checking in. Always nice to hear good things and that a poem "provoked thought" is IMHO a great compliment.
Gorelick Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:59 AM
This is so very good...Perfect ending. Hope it does well for you in the contest. BG
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Barbara, it made it into the contest winners circle. Thank you for your encouragement.
Mehta Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 5:58 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, enjoyed it, John
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