Just Down the Road

It was getting dark
    And they still hadn't  reached
 Then suddenly   the brakes screeched
    And on the side of the road they parked
 They were acutely aware
     That they were in the middle of nowhere

  As  they looked at the map
     They found their mistake
 instead of turning left a right they did make
     So they doubled back to fill in the gap

 Then just down the road
     They saw an old house
 It was shuttered and closed
       And probably had its own ghost

 But they were hungry and tired
      And with nowhere else in sight
 They decided to spend the night
      As they entered the house, everything seemed alright 

 But that was the last time they'd ever be seen
       The old hag that lived there was a killing machine
  A graveyard of cars by an old rusty gate
       Told the story of those who had  met the same fate
  They had made the mistake of entering an abode
         That was in the middle of nowhere, and  just down the road
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Very descriptive story - I wasn't expecting the ending - many congrats hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 7:23 AM
WOW, a powerful write and the last two lines really pack a punch. Congratulations Joseph on your fine win. Adding this to my fav poem list.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Superb write Joseph! Congrats on big win!
Kayode Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 1:14 AM
What a fantastic teaching here Joseph...don't enter an abode that is in the middle of nowhere...thank you for sharing and congrats on the win...huggs
A   Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Joseph, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Congrats on fine win!!
A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:19 PM
lovely win..>SKAT<
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:01 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, Joseh
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 4:37 PM
I enjoy horror writes; this worked for me. Congrats on your win, Joseph! // paul
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:55 AM
enjoyed the mood of this piece.. big cheers on your win, joseph.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:35 PM
I love ghost stories and you told this one so well, Joseph. Your poem was the only one with a "horror" theme, so it really stood out to me! Great work! Congrats on your win!
Shiells Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Hi Joseph, That was a wonderfully versed story from beginning to Very end.yikes! Well done. Thank you for visiting my page and leaving your kind words. Thanks for sharing. Very best in the contest. Peace, Deborah
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:35 PM
aha, I think this is the first terror tale I saw using this theme. SO that means you are unique!! Way to go. Hope to see it on the winners list
Merrill Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:58 AM
Hi Joseph. Glad I dropped by, as this is a cool write. I enjoyed reading it. Kudos, my friend...~M
Anglesey Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 10:55 PM
Wow... I sure wasn't expecting that scenerio. Captivating all the way through... really enjoy a poem with a plot ... :)
Poteet Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 9:32 AM
Suspense headed in the direction one would expect, but it kept me on the edge of my seat. A campfire tale if I'd heard one set to poetry. Enjoyable, Joseph.
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 3:35 PM
Yup, you think they have seen enough of the movies and have at least heard the tale of Hansel and Gretel? But nope every new generation forgets the lessons of their elders. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Cute one..Those that enter beware of whatever is lurking there..Sara
Mehta Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Creative and enjoyable write on the theme of the contest, joseph
Macfarlane Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:07 PM
If I get lost, I'm going to sleep in my car...lol. Good write Joseph. Hugs
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