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My boss was a sneak and a cheat.
His wife was much nicer and sweet.
She caught him with Susie,
A flaunting it floozie
And threw him right out in the street.
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For Carolyn's contestWon no. 4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Carolyn Devonshire's "Horrible Bosses" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn,Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful winning poem so amazing ..great title luv..enjoy..we are away for two weeks in Florida with grand babies having fun..
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations on your win!!! Tony
Freeman Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 8:25 PM
"A flaunting it floozie" my kind of line, Joyce... remember that when you write a limerick for me. Hilarious! You Go Girl! Agape, Moses
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations! Your limerick flaunts you. Delightful.
Dufresne Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 5:33 PM
well done in true limerick form Joyce. Congrats to you
Song Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Your bosses' punishment definately fit the crime. Congrats on this winning piece. Very fun write. Gwendolen
Williams Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:12 PM
hey joyce congrats on your win dave
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:12 PM
:) Let's just say this man got what he deserved, Joyce. Congratulations on your win. Check the blog I just posted on the home page and you'll find that a dozen people helped decide the rankings for this contest. Love, Carolyn
Ramsdale Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your win! Caryl Ramsdale
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 10:20 PM
Good for HER. this is great, Joyce!
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Nice humor, Joyce
Golden Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 12:16 AM
:o) What a wonderful "welcome back" for me! So good to read your works again, Joyce!
Poet Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 11:31 PM
Nice humour here Joyce...best wishes in the contest.
Singe Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:08 PM
lovley.
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