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Just Desserts

Her sugar intake was phenomenal, her blood index astronomical! She had become a sugar freak, three meals a day, seven days a week. Her doctor’s warning she ignored, his food suggestions had her bored. Her pancreas, he pointed out, was low on insulin, or just about. Predicted she’d have to quit all sugar or face an early burial. Laughed it off as a cheap scare tactic preferring to remain a diabetic. Said the doctor with a pun perverse: “As you wish, you’re getting your just desserts.”

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Date: 7/26/2025 4:47:00 PM
Hello Maurice, Yes she is getting her just dessert. My friend. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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Date: 7/26/2025 9:00:00 AM
love the dry humour here - my first poem on soup was called Just Desserts lol and its the only poem to feature in both my books! hugs jan xx
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 7/27/2025 6:41:00 AM
IOf you have the time, Jan, I'd enjoy reading your version of my "Just Desserts." Thanks for the stop by. / Maurice

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