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Just Come Closer

Come closer, just a little closer break down the barriers and rise over the blindness where one can see your bits of beauty silently eluding me Shade the penciled lines highlighting hues of black and white with rainbow eyes a kaleidoscope decorating nature's view savoring every ounce of innocence true Let your petals float in an essence of trust leave lasting wafts of honey upon my lips linger awhile letting our wanton ways exist just come closer and I'll take the hurt away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/9/2017 5:31:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. When turning to your page somehow the mouse went directly to this entry. I'm so glad it did. What can be said for such an entry. EVERYTHING. It is poetry with the poetic flair tone voice and words. It has it all including a title. Well done
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:48:00 AM
Just love this romantic write. Definitely a fav. This is really, really good writing.
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:38:00 AM
- Lovely written, Tim ... protective wings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2017 6:32:00 PM
oooh, so sweet and beautiful. I agree with Charma. it's a very soothing poem for a loved one.
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Date: 1/8/2017 4:06:00 PM
Very soothing and comforting. I would love for my girl to have that kind of guy when She grows up...A guy who is always there to protect her, and take away her pain. . Lovely. A fave.
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Date: 1/7/2017 10:12:00 PM
Very romantic, "leave lasting wafts of honey upon my lips" be careful with that one, might get stung! :)
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Date: 1/7/2017 9:59:00 PM
A VERY UPLIFTING WRITE MY FRIEND. TENDER GETS THE LADIES ASWOONING EVERY TIME. Bravo!! A7
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:46:00 PM
A lovely write, Tim. I love the line 'of black and white with rainbow eyes. Beautiful mate /|\
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:32:00 PM
Yes...beautiful write Tim! jim
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Date: 1/6/2017 8:46:00 PM
Dream on! Dream on! More like, she'd take your hurt away:) Nice one, Tim:)
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