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Just Clouds They seem just ordinary fill for a background, a fuzzy white or gray that doesn't grab the eye and distract from the more deserving stuff like trees, sweeping ocean views and mountain lakes. Clouds lack a clean line. They seldom get prime billing unless infused with anger and about to burst, or wear the outrageous colors of a rising or setting sun. Many exclude them altogether with a preference for a blue, totally cloudless sky. Frankly, total blue is boring to me. Give me tufts of purest white drifting soundlessly across an otherwise featureless sky, big bellied storm clouds, dark and sagging with weight, rumbling with thunder, letting their load of water go. And wrap me in the soft, filtered light of low, misty clouds that have learnt how to weep, keep me safe from the big towering giants that grow with menace on a distant horizon and bless me with the unseen ones that send down a gentle rain at night to lull me off to sleep.

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Date: 6/1/2024 5:34:00 AM
Yeah, and if ya lie down in a grassy field and squint just a bit they will put on a shapeshifting show for you. Beautifully written Paul, the clouds will blush at sunset.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/2/2024 2:40:00 AM
They are starting to shapeshift without me having to squint...should I be concerned ?. Thankyou John for your kind words my friend...welcomed.
Date: 6/1/2024 3:31:00 AM
Paul what can l say that l havent said before? I saw those clouds and felt your words....you are a masterful poet my friend and l love being taken away with your words! Another beauty my dear Aussie friend! Debx
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Date: 6/2/2024 2:36:00 AM
Too kind in your praise my dear friend....though I must confess it's a confidence booster for which I am sincerely grateful. I am honoured that my little creations find such a warm welcome in your creative world. Deeply thankful, Deb

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