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Just Clouds

They seem just ordinary fill
for a background, a fuzzy white
or gray that doesn't grab the eye
and distract from the more deserving
stuff like trees, sweeping ocean views
and mountain lakes. Clouds lack
a clean line.

They seldom get prime billing
unless infused with anger and about
to burst, or wear the outrageous 
colors of a rising or setting sun.
Many exclude them altogether 
with a preference for a blue, 
totally cloudless sky.

Frankly, total blue is boring to me.
Give me tufts of purest white
drifting soundlessly across 
an otherwise featureless sky,
big bellied storm clouds, dark
and sagging with weight, 
rumbling with thunder, 
letting their load of water go.

And wrap me 
in the soft, filtered light 
of low, misty clouds that have learnt 
how to weep, keep me safe
from the big towering giants 
that grow with menace on a distant
horizon and bless me 
with the unseen ones
that send down a gentle rain at night
to lull me off to sleep.


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Date: 6/1/2024 5:34:00 AM
Yeah, and if ya lie down in a grassy field and squint just a bit they will put on a shapeshifting show for you. Beautifully written Paul, the clouds will blush at sunset.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/2/2024 2:40:00 AM
They are starting to shapeshift without me having to squint...should I be concerned ?. Thankyou John for your kind words my friend...welcomed.
Date: 6/1/2024 3:31:00 AM
Paul what can l say that l havent said before? I saw those clouds and felt your words....you are a masterful poet my friend and l love being taken away with your words! Another beauty my dear Aussie friend! Debx
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Date: 6/2/2024 2:36:00 AM
Too kind in your praise my dear friend....though I must confess it's a confidence booster for which I am sincerely grateful. I am honoured that my little creations find such a warm welcome in your creative world. Deeply thankful, Deb

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