Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Just Before Dark

A scarlet sun slips over the edge of Earth,
light is banished, until Dawn's rebirth.
Twilight softens a dog's bark
with tweets of a lark,
just before
dark.
At its core,
Dusk appears so stark;
till fireflies light up the park.
While Luna imbues feelings of mirth,
a scarlet sun slips over the edge of Earth.

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Line Gauthier May 14, 2018 at 10:11 PM Beautiful, Emile. Emile Pinet May 15, 2018 at 8:37 AM Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Skat A October 21, 2015 at 9:25 PM Emile, Wonderful win.................. SKAT Emile Pinet October 22, 2015 at 10:00 AM Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.

Sandra Haight October 18, 2015 at 4:35 PM Wonderful imagery, Emile. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Emile Pinet October 18, 2015 at 7:44 PM Thanks Sandra, I appreciate it. Emile.

Edward Ebbs October 18, 2015 at 8:57 AM Emile...good job and congrats! Emile Pinet October 18, 2015 at 11:30 AM Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong October 18, 2015 at 6:55 AM You did yours perfectly Emile. I just can't seem to get the hang of it. Mine was so bad I removed it. I will try to learn from yours how to do it correctly. I loved your entry Emile. Congratulations on your first place win. Very deserving! Emile Pinet October 18, 2015 at 8:34 AM Thank you Connie, your comments are always a pleasure to read. Emile.

Jan Allison October 17, 2015 at 9:07 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet October 18, 2015 at 8:35 AM Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2015 at 8:51 PM gorgeous imagery, my friend. Congrats in my contest. Emile Pinet October 18, 2015 at 8:37 AM Thanks Andrea, it was my pleasure to participate. Emile.

Alexis Y. October 17, 2015 at 8:37 PM Emile, congratulations on you win:-)Alexis Emile Pinet October 18, 2015 at 8:37 AM Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.

CayCay Godwin October 7, 2015 at 4:27 AM Very well done, Emile, and quite pretty to fill the senses ... CayCay Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 9:54 AM Thank you CayCay, it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Emile.

Michael Tor October 7, 2015 at 2:42 AM A nice write Emile full of imagery. Liked the way you took me through the cycle from day to night. Very difficult form to try you have done very well with it. Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 9:55 AM Thank you Michael, your comments are always a pleasure to read. Emile.

Laura Leiser October 6, 2015 at 11:09 PM What a brilliant poem, Emile! The imagery is stunning! A 7 and a fave :) Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thank you so much Laura, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2015 at 11:04 PM I like the heavy imagery, Emile. A dying sun slipping. Never thought of it that way. The days fade. Enjoyed.... LINDA Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 9:59 AM Thanks Linda, your comments are most encouraging. Emile.

Jan Allison October 6, 2015 at 10:05 PM Beautifully penned with lovely imagery Emile. This is my second attempt at this form and I found this quite a challenge! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7 Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 9:58 AM Thanks Jan, I found it to be quite a challenge as well, it taxes the brain. Emile.