Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Just Be Grateful -

Praying for the day I meet  heaven 
You being there sharing this moment
In paradise here I come with open arms 

Listening to the song of a magical lullaby
I will bathe in your teardrops love 
That special place drowns in a sea of roses

Kissing gently the eyes that they fall from
Our time must flow in ceaseless praise
Salted everyone in your deep beauty shines amazing  grace 

A piece of your heart's dreams 
fantasies and love sails away in a treasure pearl
Spices of the soul I surrender to your drops

Falling from a great height like summer rain
All of the things that make us who we are
Softly as they run a river gently down the face






Unrhymed tercet 
Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  08.08.2015 
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Angeline Haikutwinkle January 25, 2017 at 11:04 AM Again, magical imagery here.

Eve Roper August 20, 2015 at 10:07 AM wonderful write from both of you hugs eve 7 Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2015 at 2:49 PM - Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Eva :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock August 18, 2015 at 11:18 AM Beautiful written by the two of you. I love this one and will add to my fav. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2015 at 12:43 PM - Dear Phyllis, thanks for nice visit a fav. and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan August 14, 2015 at 4:01 PM Well this is very nice collaberation Anne Lise xxx :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2015 at 12:41 PM - My friend Debbie, many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kaila B.A August 12, 2015 at 5:49 PM I love it ! Touched my heart Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2015 at 12:41 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Kaila :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper August 12, 2015 at 1:21 AM A lovely collaborative poem Ann-Lise, love truly is a divine given gift. And a thing for which we all should be eternally grateful. Your two pens have woven a beautiful tapestry. love Shane xxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2015 at 12:40 PM - Dear Shane, many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter August 11, 2015 at 8:20 PM Hi Ann Lise n' Liam!A very beautiful, captivating love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling! A little sad but so very beautifully written.An excellent piece!A very heavenly sweet romantic piece to be held very close to my heart.Great imagery!Just awesome!Fantastic collaboration!Your pens are mighty golden!A 7 to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2015 at 12:39 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Catherine Labeau August 10, 2015 at 11:43 AM yea trust me I know my shit and it smell good Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 2:17 PM - OK. ...... it smells heavenly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2015 at 10:29 AM heavenly song from you and liam, anne... so divine... sweet day to you.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 2:16 PM - Yes, it became a beautiful poem when two write with ink of hearts :) - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez August 10, 2015 at 4:35 AM Another successful collab, Anne and Liam. So gentle. each line. 7 and hugs to both of you! Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 10:49 AM - I'm glad you enjoy our poems, dear Kim - A special thank you for a 7 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam August 10, 2015 at 2:17 AM Excellent. Lovely imagery write. Feel good. Enjoyed reading it, Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 3:27 AM - Thanks for reading it and lovely comments, my friend Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Despirito August 9, 2015 at 10:15 PM Very beautiful Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 3:25 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France August 9, 2015 at 8:33 PM Anne-Lise, you both penned a beauty, lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my February poem Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 3:32 AM - I'm glad you enjoy our poems, dear B.W. - A special thank you for a 7 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath August 9, 2015 at 3:37 PM Grateful and beautiful both my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 3:30 AM - A pleasure to share this poem with you, dear Bl - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus August 9, 2015 at 3:20 PM This is very lovely! Well done to the both of you, Anne Lise and Liam! I must have said this before, but you seem to share one pen between you...seamless collaboration:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2015 at 3:29 AM - Yes, we share the same ink Paul :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman August 9, 2015 at 1:12 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! This one my friends is a quite beautiful and heartfelt write for sure. Each individual Tercet stanza ends with a memorable verse that I think ties the whole poem together superbly. Excellent Write!! TR + FAV!! Cheers, Gary (P.S. Anne-Lise, I just posted "What the Heavenly Angels Above Speak of" which you and Liam might be interested in from a divine perspective. Again, great work here with your co-written effort!! GB) Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 2:58 PM - Gary my friend, a pleasure to share this poem with you - Highly appreciate your comment and are happy when you hide it in your "special book" :) - Thanks !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 9, 2015 at 11:46 AM I saw your blog dear Anne Lise, and praying with you--- stay strong-- God bless you and your father-- sending you hugs and love-- nikko Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 2:45 PM - Oh....Nikko (?:::?), I would not know you at your new avatar :))) - Thanks for the beautiful words and compassion - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven August 9, 2015 at 8:58 AM You manage love poems with an effortless grace. This piece is another beauty. I have just been reading a comment of yours that suggests you are a Nurse. Me too. Keep up the good work, and good words. Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 2:53 PM - A profession that requires a warm heart - thank you for the lovely visit and comments at Liam and my poem, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen August 9, 2015 at 6:25 AM Mimmm!!!! What a fabulous write, it is beautiful and excellence.........A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 2:46 PM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 9, 2015 at 5:45 AM What an explosion of grandiose beauty! You two will make the muse of poetry jealous! A seven to each, dear Anne-Lise and dear Liam! Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 2:50 PM - I'm glad you enjoy our poems, dear friend Demetrios - A big thank you for a 7 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 8, 2015 at 7:07 PM Love the imagery Anne lise and Liam I especially love the final stanza:-) wonderful collaboration :-) hugs Jan xx 7 Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 9:57 AM - I understood what you meant .... dear friend Jan :))) Jan Allison August 9, 2015 at 8:01 AM I love the whole poem too but the imagery of the river of tears I can relate to:-( Hugs janxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 7:36 AM - ...... I love the whole poem ..... from the first to the last line :) - Liams and my poems have a special place in my heart :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian August 8, 2015 at 4:39 PM Here are two of the sweetest poets...Sunshine and Romantic Liam! :) Sending you hugs.....Heaven will be wonderful, but heaven can also be a place on earth! Where there is love, there is paradise. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 7:34 AM - Absolutely, it could be a place on earth dear Eileen - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid August 8, 2015 at 3:49 PM your words flowed beautiful anne lise in this piece just sailed this to the high heavens passing you a warm smile wishing you a golden weekend dear pal bless you always Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 7:31 AM - With happiness and love .... always, my dear friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 3:31 PM A sad but beautiful tercet A-L and Liam...lovely Tim Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2015 at 7:30 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend Tim - Always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid August 8, 2015 at 3:53 PM passing you a warm smile tim thanks pal wishing you beautiful weekend sorry not around much these days i do pop on time to time lovely to see you dear friend