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I'm coming! And the swaying root. Midday peace, glowing in the dark. This golden grain of grace bears fruit. Just howls of insects are fixed lark. Since the cheerful warblers won't hoot.
Written: August 08, 2022 Just August Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Verified By HMS.COM: 5 lines with 8 syllables each.

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Date: 8/9/2022 4:38:00 PM
Love your adjectives in this Quatrain, Lasaad. A good entry for the contest. I also like the picture you choose to go with your poem. Thanks for sharing my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/9/2022 11:32:00 AM
Such a beautiful composition, as golden as the lilting marigold. Thank you for this splendid share
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Date: 8/9/2022 1:19:00 AM
Very nicely penned Sotto, I especially like the third line, best wishes
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Date: 8/9/2022 1:00:00 AM
Loved this poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/8/2022 8:57:00 PM
A great entry for Andrea's contest ! All the Best dear friend!
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