Just As Midnight Chimes

Santa Claus Gives us pause But just as midnight chimes This jolly Saint comes in the 'Nick' of time

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Heidi Sands

Date: 12/1/2018 8:04:00 AM

A sweet, fun poem Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2018 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. Glad you liked it! Season's Best! ~ Gershon

Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/30/2018 8:19:00 PM

Love it - puts me in mind of my favorite song by Bonnie Raitte

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2018 8:03:00 PM

Is the song "Merry Christmas, Baby?" If so, I've checked it out (and am trying to fathom the connection). At any rate, thanks for your encouraging comment, and Season's Best, Sherry! ~ Gershon

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/30/2018 6:27:00 PM

Oh, Gershon, the delight of your witty word play leaves me with a smile. Happy holiday wishes to you, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2018 7:53:00 PM

And to you as well, my poetic friend!! ~ Gershon

Paul Callus

Date: 11/30/2018 3:08:00 PM

Short and sweet; love the end word play. // paul

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2018 7:44:00 PM

Paul, thank you for viewing and for your encouraging words. Season's best! ~ Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 11/30/2018 2:26:00 PM

That he does. He is really something special because I saw him at the mall one Christmas Eve and it was late and I was like, "Hey dude, shouldn't you be going?" But, he still made it by the next day. :) Nice one GW

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2018 2:45:00 PM

Imagine that! He just never ceases to amaze! :)