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For my mother and grandmother

Just a woman


She is always in a position of humility
                        An attitude of prayer
                                        Ready to serve
     For years of submitting has bent her back
                    Formed a hunch between shoulder blades
                        Eyes cast down she sees the downtrodden 
She rarely stumbles 
         She is always in a position to reach out
                       Hands always in front…to do
Age spots, arthritic knuckles
                    They are intelligent hands, 
             knowing the temperature of anything they touch, creating sustenance from flour and water, 
   planting, growing, plucking, connecting, applauding
Her hands speak a thousand words
                                             in a dozen languages
 She is always on her feet
                    Moving, busy, seeking the next task
     Wiping this, folding that, stirring, fixing, caressing,   
                               working, working…
It seems the very fabric of the universe
           will unravel when she leaves her station 
                               The sky will fall
                                     The laws of nature not knowing  
                                                how to continue without her
           She's just a grandmother, 
                                               just a wife, 
                                                           just a woman.
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Date: 8/3/2025 5:31:00 AM
Crystol, this is a magnificent poem you wrote in honor of your grandmother. I feel like I have known your grandma better after reading your composition because you painted a vivid picture of her.  A delicate power radiates here.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/3/2025 6:01:00 AM
Wow, I appreciate your review! I'll hold these words in my heart, thank you! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 10:42:00 PM
An amazing poem dedication to your grandma my dear poet friend, Crystol. I always hear people saying, grandma is the greatest mom in the world and it's creatively and completely described/ portrayed in yourwords. Motherhood is extended to grandchildren and the big sacrifice/work they're doing is immeasurable. Their last and greatest love is always poured out to their grandchildren! Love your poem. Thanks for sharing. Sorry for the late visit. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/3/2025 6:03:00 AM
No apology necessary! Thank you for the favorable review! You have caught the essence of it which is gratifying! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 8:45:00 PM
such admiration dear poet....the Blessing indeed...ty...much love
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/3/2025 6:04:00 AM
Thank you! Much love recieved and sent back out! Xo<3
Date: 8/2/2025 8:27:00 PM
This reminds me of my friend she turned 90 in January.....and goes for coffee with friends every morning at 9:30...her name is Edie
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/3/2025 6:05:00 AM
Edit sounds amazing! We loveour senior citizens! Ty! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 5:18:00 PM
what a loving tribute! You've created both a physical and mental image of your grandmother...like I know her a little bit after reading your poem. She exudes a gentle strength. She must have been a powerful influence in your life. Well done! hugs, Sara
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/2/2025 5:33:00 PM
Oh thank you how lovely to be recieved so well! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 12:34:00 PM
Wonderful piece. Great tribute to your mother and grandmother. Powerful pen. Enjoyed immensely.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/2/2025 5:34:00 PM
Oh thank you Frank! how lovely to be recieved so well! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 10:25:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your mother and grandmother Crystal, lovely poetry… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/2/2025 5:34:00 PM
Oh thank you Beryl!!- how lovely to be recieved so well! Xo
Date: 8/2/2025 8:15:00 AM
You have just painted a picture that so ideally describes my mother also...she is very nearly 90 years old now. Beautiful, heartfelt piece of poetry, Crystol. There is much dignity and love shown here. Splendid write! :) john
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/2/2025 5:35:00 PM
Thank you... so great that you see your mother here! Xo
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