Darren White Poet Quatrain

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Just a Small Poem For a Friend

Little blue bird
                         without a name
                                It's you I heard
                                    I play your game
                                       High in that tree
                                    You sing a song
                            And you want me
                  To fly along
             The beach is near
              But stars are far
                  A sky so clear
               And then we are
        Above the clouds
      The clear blue sea
       We sing out loud
           Just you and me

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May 30, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White

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Frances Schiavina June 27, 2017 at 3:04 PM Uplifting and easy to follow. Well done Darren White June 28, 2017 at 5:35 AM Thank you :)

Carol Deason June 24, 2017 at 7:59 PM Very nice poem! Friendship is a beautiful gift and you convey it perfectly. Darren White June 25, 2017 at 12:48 AM Thank you Carol, I agree that friendship is important.

Phil Capitano June 22, 2017 at 8:13 AM Big words in a small poem; its great to have such a friend. Nice one Darren. Darren White June 22, 2017 at 8:25 AM Thank you Phil, I feel lucky. I love my friends. :)

Jeremy Smith May 31, 2017 at 10:16 PM Your friend, is very lucky :) Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:36 AM I am lucky that I have good friends here :)

Arthur Vaso May 31, 2017 at 9:12 PM Small poem, huge heart! Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:36 AM My heart has a lot of room, for many people

Carole Duet May 31, 2017 at 9:08 PM So lovely, Darren. Bluebirds (even symbolic ones) are my favorite. They are so beautiful and rare. A FAV for me! Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:35 AM wow, I love it, that fav :)

Ilene Bauer May 31, 2017 at 7:05 PM charming! Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:35 AM Happy you like it, Ilene :)

White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 6:46 PM What a wonderful first poem to wake up to! Stunning, Duir! Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:34 AM Thanks Budgie :)

Jan Allison May 31, 2017 at 4:40 PM absolutely delightful Darren - the formatting reminds me of geese in flight:-) hugs jan xx Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:33 AM yeah, tried so simulate flight indeed HUGS

Eye Truth-Teller May 31, 2017 at 4:12 PM Eye fly with the blue bird Darren White June 1, 2017 at 12:33 AM Yep, thanks Eye :)

Lisa Ricci May 31, 2017 at 4:09 PM Top of The Evening Darren. How beautiful is this. Very. How poetic in formatting and presentation is this. Very. Your sentiments for your friend is lovely. Your friend is also blessed to have such a friend in you. Sorry I've been missing your work. Have a great night. Well done in its entirety. -- s m i l e -- Darren White June 1, 2017 at 5:04 AM You're welcome my friend, and no need to be sorry about anything. :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 31, 2017 at 3:43 PM Your form as well as your words soar in this lovely piece Darren! 7 ; ) Darren White June 1, 2017 at 5:03 AM Thanks Connie :)

Chris Green May 31, 2017 at 3:17 PM Aw, this was really nice Darren. The way you have phrased this poem makes it feel like it is floating on air. Very beautiful and heart felt. Darren White May 31, 2017 at 3:20 PM Thanks my friend! It looks nice, doesn't it :)

Heidi Sands May 31, 2017 at 3:16 PM This is so sweet Darren! I really enjoyed it :) Darren White May 31, 2017 at 3:19 PM Thank you Heidi, glad you liked it :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 31, 2017 at 3:02 PM What a delightful way to play and sing along Darren:) Amitiés Darren White May 31, 2017 at 3:04 PM Anne-Marie, thank you, sing and play please :)

Tim Smith May 31, 2017 at 2:41 PM This is beautiful...I love it a fav Darren White May 31, 2017 at 2:45 PM That is wonderful :D Thanks my friend!