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pebbles

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Just a Slip of Tongue

A runner plagued 
by endless thirst,
tried all manner of things 
to end the curse. 
A camel bag or bottle 
slowed his pace.
His yen for simple, 
lasting relief, became a race -
Relentless!

Seeing smooth pebbles
in the bed of a stream,
he took a pea-sized one; 
stowing it under his tongue.
His saliva flowed; 
his thirst was gone, up-aweigh!
Until the bump, the trip; 
the slip from tongue -
Breathless!
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Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Priceless turn of events at the end, John ... Great poetry, my friend. Bill
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July 31, 2025 at 6:11 PM
Unfortunately it happened to a friend
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