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pebbles

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A runner plagued by endless thirst, tried all manner of things to end the curse. A camel bag or bottle slowed his pace. His yen for simple, lasting relief, became a race - Relentless! Seeing smooth pebbles in the bed of a stream, he took a pea-sized one; stowing it under his tongue. His saliva flowed; his thirst was gone, up-aweigh! Until the bump, the trip; the slip from tongue - Breathless!

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Date: 7/31/2025 6:06:00 PM
Priceless turn of events at the end, John ... Great poetry, my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/31/2025 6:11:00 PM
Unfortunately it happened to a friend

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