Just a Peek

Just a peek inside my window
there's a touch I let you be
a place with good intentions
come on in and set me free

You're the warmth upon my pillow
the mist held nearer my cheek
my moments brought in the ever after
you're the only angel that I seek

There's a candle on the mantel
burning bright so we can see
the other side of my moonlight
where your flickers dance for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/5/2017 1:04:00 PM
Love the imagery and flow
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Date: 11/3/2017 12:47:00 PM
I, too, am a sucker for rhymes! I love this!
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:34:00 AM
Timmy, I'm a sucker for a good rhyme and this is better than that. Please write more rhymes. This particular form seems to go unappreciated by the Poetry Elite but it sure hits home to the rest of us. God Bless
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Date: 11/3/2017 5:45:00 AM
This is so sweet and romantic, Tim.
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:04:00 PM
Nice to see a rhyme from you Tim, really nice, romantic of course, great imagery!
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:32:00 PM
A candle burning bright - this poem is full with beautiful images and so romantic <3 It is a favorite! :)
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:20:00 PM
Tim hope your candle is of the everlasting kind. Beautiful words and music...fav...Seren
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:05:00 PM
Very beautiful, Tim, I love reading your poems Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/2/2017 4:08:00 PM
Wow what a nice poem with a perfect ending. I enjoyed this Tim. Well done :)
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Date: 11/2/2017 1:12:00 PM
- This video really hits my heart and soul, Tim - Really deep feelings in word and song - Brought tears in my eyes - Your poem feels more uptimistic and beautiful - Your light shines lovely, for love - Enjoy listening and reading, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2017 12:19:00 PM
How lovely and romantic this is Tim.I really love the last stanza.Glad to read you again.
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Date: 11/2/2017 11:14:00 AM
The heat from that candle flame doesn't burn as hot as your chosen words, Tim. Your attached song would play beautiful background music to a night such as this one...dancing shadows in the dark, on "the other side of my moonlight..." perfectly expressed passion and love. Sighing over this favorite one.
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