Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Just a Peek

Just a peek inside my window
there's a touch I let you be
a place with good intentions
come on in and set me free

You're the warmth upon my pillow
the mist held nearer my cheek
my moments brought in the ever after
you're the only angel that I seek

There's a candle on the mantel
burning bright so we can see
the other side of my moonlight
where your flickers dance for me

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Nathan D. November 5, 2017 at 1:04 PM Love the imagery and flow

Anna Hopper November 3, 2017 at 12:47 PM I, too, am a sucker for rhymes! I love this!

Jerry T Curtis November 3, 2017 at 9:34 AM Timmy, I'm a sucker for a good rhyme and this is better than that. Please write more rhymes. This particular form seems to go unappreciated by the Poetry Elite but it sure hits home to the rest of us. God Bless

Becca Teagan November 3, 2017 at 5:45 AM This is so sweet and romantic, Tim.

John Hamilton November 2, 2017 at 10:04 PM Nice to see a rhyme from you Tim, really nice, romantic of course, great imagery!

Sara Ella November 2, 2017 at 9:32 PM A candle burning bright - this poem is full with beautiful images and so romantic <3 It is a favorite! :)

Seren Roberts November 2, 2017 at 9:20 PM Tim hope your candle is of the everlasting kind. Beautiful words and music...fav...Seren

Eve Roper November 2, 2017 at 9:05 PM Very beautiful, Tim, I love reading your poems Hugs Eve ~`*

Heidi Sands November 2, 2017 at 4:08 PM Wow what a nice poem with a perfect ending. I enjoyed this Tim. Well done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2017 at 1:12 PM - This video really hits my heart and soul, Tim - Really deep feelings in word and song - Brought tears in my eyes - Your poem feels more uptimistic and beautiful - Your light shines lovely, for love - Enjoy listening and reading, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop November 2, 2017 at 12:19 PM How lovely and romantic this is Tim.I really love the last stanza.Glad to read you again.

Lin Lane November 2, 2017 at 11:14 AM The heat from that candle flame doesn't burn as hot as your chosen words, Tim. Your attached song would play beautiful background music to a night such as this one...dancing shadows in the dark, on "the other side of my moonlight..." perfectly expressed passion and love. Sighing over this favorite one.