Just a Little Longer

( JUST A LITTLE LONGER )

Desolation,
Wide open space,
Between the trees and me,
Emptiness and me,
Confusion and decisions,
Feelings hard to define,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer, 

Coldness seeps
Its way in,
I am falling deeper,
Into what I fear most,
As I reach out,
There is nothing there,
As possible there was something once,
Only to be gone,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer, 

The sun drops,
The last inch of light falls,
The squirrels more likely to be huddled up,
But not me,
Something I never possessed,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer, 

Then the sun has gone,
Darkness spreads its wings over me,
I see nothing so no one sees me,
Feeling of bitterness only,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer, 

An Owl peers down,
With question in her eyes,
She doesn't have a hope,
In helping me,
As she doesn't see my pain,
Spreads her wings,
Passes me by,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer, 

The soft earth,
Seems the only thing holding me up,
Even then I could slip,
And wondering takes me,
To why and how I got here,
Without even knowing it,
Yet no one notices,
As they didn't see before,
So I say to myself,
Just a little longer, 

Shimmering in the darkness,
I see two moons,
Reflecting off a stream of thoughts,
Ongoing forever more,
Along a rocky road,
Slowly giving in to finding a way out,
I take the plunge under the river,
Then the wind carries a whisper,
Gently on a breeze,
'Just a little longer.'

(c) Jasmine Paul 11-22-2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/2/2014 12:43:00 PM
I love this, so many twists and turns. Great write!
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:14:00 AM
My family lost someone dear to us, and I am sure that mental illness was to blame, people fighting mental illness shouldn't have to fight alone; we don't expect someone with hardened arteries to "just hold on a little longer." Brains are organs of the human body just like hearts, and they are subject to disease, treatable disease. Nicely written poem Jasmine.
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