Just a Little Humor

I have a tree 
growing out of my head.
I wonder, should I be dead?

There in the blue 
I saw a shadow 
Oh my, what shall I do?

Down the forbidden path 
That's where I fell for you 
Should I take a bath?



11   25   2012 Sunday
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Sietesantos Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Awwww! This piece brought a huge grin to my face - so witty! I enjoyed the humor. Hugs. pandita
Hoffman Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 10:47 PM
This is so cute and funny at the same time Debbie! Enjoyed!~Che :)
Vaso Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 9:54 PM
Humor at its best! I liked! :)
Goudreau Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 9:41 PM
Lol such a sweet write dear friend. Love the imagery, imagination and the lovely twist of humour! Ty for sharing. Lol so funny..
De Burca Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:24 AM
ahh what a cutie of a poem, thanks for the smile. Fun is good.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Now that you've met someone new, I would think that a bath would be in order. Humor is healing. Thanks and blessings, Janis.
Deo Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Debbie, if it happened on a Sunday, by all means, take a bath. Thanks for reading my lighter (education) poems. These days, I MUST use my writing to argue for Supremacy of God, not this or that group of self-styled pure race, from imagined planets. We are pretty mixed on earth.
Babcock Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 5:04 PM
A cute little poem that made me smile. Yes I have not been around much. Had 3 surgeries in the last 7 months so just starting to get my head back together as the anestitic wiped me out. Thanks for reading my poem and noticing I was not around much. love phyl
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 5:03 AM
Your poems sure made me smile and I loved the ending :-) I have a tree growing in my head Debbie ... its called poetree:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Debbie, thanks so much for showing me this one! Well, for telling me it was posted. It is humorous indeed . A tree growing out of my head. So funny! And the ending just summed it up great!! Thanks so much for viewing several of my poems tonight. Wish I could give this a seven. They don't let us do that any more!
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