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Just a Little Humor

I have a tree growing out of my head. I wonder, should I be dead? There in the blue I saw a shadow Oh my, what shall I do? Down the forbidden path That's where I fell for you Should I take a bath? 11 25 2012 Sunday

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/1/2018 12:54:00 PM

Awwww! This piece brought a huge grin to my face - so witty! I enjoyed the humor. Hugs. pandita

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/10/2017 10:47:00 PM

This is so cute and funny at the same time Debbie! Enjoyed!~Che :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/11/2017 9:54:00 PM

Humor at its best! I liked! :)

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/21/2017 9:41:00 PM

Lol such a sweet write dear friend. Love the imagery, imagination and the lovely twist of humour! Ty for sharing. Lol so funny..

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 10/6/2017 7:24:00 AM

ahh what a cutie of a poem, thanks for the smile. Fun is good.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 8/26/2017 6:56:00 PM

Now that you've met someone new, I would think that a bath would be in order. Humor is healing. Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Anil Deo

Date: 8/19/2017 9:25:00 PM

Debbie, if it happened on a Sunday, by all means, take a bath. Thanks for reading my lighter (education) poems. These days, I MUST use my writing to argue for Supremacy of God, not this or that group of self-styled pure race, from imagined planets. We are pretty mixed on earth.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/19/2017 5:04:00 PM

A cute little poem that made me smile. Yes I have not been around much. Had 3 surgeries in the last 7 months so just starting to get my head back together as the anestitic wiped me out. Thanks for reading my poem and noticing I was not around much. love phyl

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2017 5:03:00 AM

Your poems sure made me smile and I loved the ending :-) I have a tree growing in my head Debbie ... its called poetree:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2017 9:12:00 PM

Debbie, thanks so much for showing me this one! Well, for telling me it was posted. It is humorous indeed . A tree growing out of my head. So funny! And the ending just summed it up great!! Thanks so much for viewing several of my poems tonight. Wish I could give this a seven. They don't let us do that any more!