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Just a Little Bit of Sugar-'sugar Slave'

Sunshine smiling smarties on sugary snowy slopes Eating éclair evenings where everyone elopes Cotton Candy climbing with cascading caramel Delicious dancing donuts devilishly desirable Jumping jealous jellybeans jousting with the jujubes And tasty toffee truffles taunting the tootsie roll tubes What a Wonderful Wunderbar World of Mr. Willy Wonka A virile victorious vision before we get to the Vodka. Feb.18.2017 Just a Little Bit of Sugar -Contest Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 2/27/2017 1:38:00 AM
Great. I do not know, what you call lines with words starting with the same letter, but this is very clever. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 2/26/2017 4:13:00 PM
Whimsical and sweet - love it! Congrats, W2!
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Date: 2/26/2017 12:56:00 PM
A little bit of adult sweets thrown in. Nice write.
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Date: 2/20/2017 8:58:00 AM
Yum yum! An irresistible sweet treat you have penned!
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Date: 2/20/2017 2:14:00 AM
Love the sweet, delectable humor of this fun write, WW! Sending a hug and thanks for your visits always, Rhonda
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Date: 2/19/2017 7:23:00 PM
Just open a bag of sugar and dig in Wingman:) A very mouthwatering read!
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Date: 2/19/2017 1:04:00 PM
I'm heading for my sweetie drawer now - a poem as cute as cotton candy - love it ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:35:00 AM
you are on a sugar binge, WW... delectable poem with wonderful use of alliteration... huggs
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