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Just a Glimpse

Summer rain arrived suddenly Pounding drums of clouds Soaking gasping land Quenching thirsty trees Energizing sizzling roads Blending with cheerful birdies’ hums He brought a smile to her lips while she watched him drizzle Showing just a little glimpse, he vanished, as if his job was over.

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Joseph May

Date: 8/10/2021 9:39:00 AM

Very nicely penned Smita

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 8/12/2021 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Joseph!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/24/2021 5:11:00 AM

A beautiful glimpse, Smita. Enjoyed the happy voice of your poem.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/29/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thank you Vijay!! -Smita

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/20/2021 11:13:00 PM

Loved your personification. In Malta, It can happen but rarely, except in summer.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/21/2021 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Victor!! A summer rain is a treat to us Californians!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/20/2021 2:10:00 PM

Love the descriptive images of the arrival of summer rain. Even a little glimpse brings happiness. BW ~ Mala

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/21/2021 9:29:00 AM

So true!! Thanks Mala!!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/20/2021 10:45:00 AM

Serendipity here, it just started raining here, now I must look out for the bird of happiness to appear lol. A lovely poem, thank you for sharing dear poet.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/21/2021 9:28:00 AM

Hope you enjoyed the rain too!! Thanks for your feedback!!