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Feeding Fledgling Blue Tit, Fledgling Blue Tit

Just a Baby Bird

 
I am just a tiny baby bird of three
high up in a bird house nest
right now I am just a fluff of feathers
and a big mouth
but one day I will fly and glide with my wings
I am sure of this because my parents can 
and early each morning my parents leave the nest
to swoop and drift on wind currents
down and then high up, then down and down
calling to each other with tweets and twitters
and they are soon joined by other birds
in circles they fly around and around 
I watch from the opening of our nest    
flapping my baby wings
but mother says I am too little yet
soon baby, soon ...  you will fly away
oh mother I want to glide and drift now
it must be wonderful riding the currents 
and in my bird nest I dream that I am flying high
tweeting and twittering loudly
one day, one day I will show them that I am a bird
right now, all I can do is make a baby demanding tweets 
oh joy, mother has brought us breakfast
so I open my beak wide  ... me first, me first

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March 31, 2022


Poetry/Personification/just a baby bird
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1444-667-31
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France


Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/31/2022

Submitted into the Standard contest, Your Second Chance- 2nd Submission
sponsor, Sotto, Judged 10/16/2022

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 10/17/2022 12:08:00 PM
Watching baby birds and their parents is such a joy Constance. Thank you for this vibrant reminder of that delight! Congratulations for your win! Blessings of joy my friend!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/17/2022 1:58:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings Constance
Date: 10/16/2022 9:10:00 AM
You have my heartfelt congratulations on winning my contest, Constance. You have written a remarkable poem that is built with many various levels of beauty.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/16/2022 2:07:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest by giving my poem a wonderful placement, and thanks for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings Constance
Date: 4/18/2022 5:13:00 PM
Oh, how sweet! Soon it will be time for the babies. A cheerful poem, fun to read :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/19/2022 7:37:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much and enjoyed writing it a lot ~Constance
Date: 3/31/2022 12:35:00 PM
what fabulous personification in your spring time poem , a joy to read Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2022 4:52:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment and visit ~Constance
Date: 3/31/2022 11:40:00 AM
Hello Constance, this poem is so cute . Good luck in the contest Your poem will be my fav. Friendship & Love, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2022 3:59:00 PM
Hello Constance, you are welcome.Love, & Friendship Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2022 12:26:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the compliment and the FAV and encouragement, blessings ~Constance
Date: 3/31/2022 10:47:00 AM
Such a delightful poem, Constance. I enjoyed every word of it.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2022 12:27:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment ~Constance
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