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God are you (there or lost) is he, she so right when not is (sin I look, hear not) any diffusion my thoughts (mysterious, bewildered mind) me not upon this (chase life unlike light) whispering butterflies suffering shelves (succeed briefly) nature unfed of love survival sharing existence (in untried eternal love I shelter my soul for your forgiveness) split by malformation (with rising faith continuing on a path chosen for me) just in tribute to E.E. Cummins,I tried to let his muse and my muse to communicate for inspiriration of his style not to exactly copy but come close, I hope this will make him proud,his style indeed is difficult for me but etremely beautiful and rich

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Date: 5/24/2009 4:14:00 AM
Cecil, I'm sure that ee is proud of you. Very nicely written. Oh, how I love butterflies. And yes, collected them as a child, not so aware back then. Congratulations on your placement in the tribute to ee cummings contest. sweet a write did you (deep thinking for). Keep writing, Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 5/22/2009 3:08:00 PM
Cecil, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:07:00 PM
YAY! Warmest congrats on a most well deserved win! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/22/2009 6:53:00 AM
Wonderful job with the ee cummings style, Cecil!! Congratulations on your winning poem!!
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Date: 5/21/2009 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Michele's contest Cecil Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/19/2009 12:29:00 PM
What an inspirational approach to the topic. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:07:00 AM
Emotional and extremely well done in his style. Good luck in the contest. I have a good feeling about this, and definitely think you made him proud. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:20:00 AM
Thrilling indeed.
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:12:00 AM
Nice job of emulating Cummings' style, Cecil! Glad to see you posting again> Surely, God could be a He or a She. And forgiveness is a great virtue. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:57:00 PM
Best wishes withn this on Cecil.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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