Juniors Feeding Time

mellow
fellow
yellow
jello

Tot throws at the mellow fellows chair
as Dad primps his yellow jello hair



1-22-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/3/2018 8:30:00 PM
Lol! Che, a humorous and well written tyburn that inspired a smile and a fond memory or two :)) Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/3/2018 8:42:00 PM
Yep, I remember those days too which is like thirty years ago when my sons were little…no grandkids yet! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan and warm wishes to you too poet friend!~Che :)
Date: 1/30/2018 4:43:00 AM
Fun tyburn, based on fact I bet! Been there, done it, happy fun days! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poetry, appreciated!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/30/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Mick; I really struggled with this form of poetry so this might be my first and last tyburn lol! This is just a fictional one btw…thanks for kind comment and visit; appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 1/29/2018 2:57:00 PM
love this, such fun to read.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/29/2018 9:05:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Harry; Appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 1/28/2018 7:21:00 PM
very amusing Che ... soup mail:) hugs jan xx
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/28/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan; hope tyburn is correct now! hugs che :)
Date: 1/28/2018 10:57:00 AM
Bahahaha!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/28/2018 7:06:00 PM
Hi Mike; glad you got chuckle out of my poem and thanks for visit!~Che :)
Date: 1/22/2018 1:56:00 PM
hahaha... this one is really good!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/22/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and glad you got chuckle out of it Silent One! Appreciate the stop by!~Che :)
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