Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Soup Social
Member Poems
Member Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Poetry Resources
Home » Poems » Cheryl Hoffman » Juniors Feeding Time

Juniors Feeding Time

mellow fellow yellow jello Tot throws at the mellow fellows chair as Dad primps his yellow jello hair 1-22-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ashley Avatar
Susan Ashley
Date: 2/3/2018 8:30:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Lol! Che, a humorous and well written tyburn that inspired a smile and a fond memory or two :)) Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Hoffman Avatar
Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/3/2018 8:42:00 PM
block poet
Yep, I remember those days too which is like thirty years ago when my sons were little…no grandkids yet! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan and warm wishes to you too poet friend!~Che :)
Talbot Avatar
Mick Talbot
Date: 1/30/2018 4:43:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Fun tyburn, based on fact I bet! Been there, done it, happy fun days! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poetry, appreciated!
Login to Reply
Hoffman Avatar
Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/30/2018 8:28:00 AM
block poet
Thanks so much Mick; I really struggled with this form of poetry so this might be my first and last tyburn lol! This is just a fictional one btw…thanks for kind comment and visit; appreciate it!~Che :)
Horsman Avatar
Harry Horsman
Date: 1/29/2018 2:57:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
love this, such fun to read.
Login to Reply
Hoffman Avatar
Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/29/2018 9:05:00 PM
block poet
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Harry; Appreciate it!~Che :)
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2018 7:21:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
very amusing Che ... soup mail:) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Hoffman Avatar
Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/28/2018 8:18:00 PM
block poet
Thanks so much Jan; hope tyburn is correct now! hugs che :)
Hauser Avatar
Mike Hauser
Date: 1/28/2018 10:57:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Bahahaha!
Login to Reply
Hoffman Avatar
Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/28/2018 7:06:00 PM
block poet
Hi Mike; glad you got chuckle out of my poem and thanks for visit!~Che :)
One Avatar
Silent One
Date: 1/22/2018 1:56:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
hahaha... this one is really good!
Login to Reply
Hoffman Avatar
Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/22/2018 8:56:00 PM
block poet
Thanks so much for very kind comment and glad you got chuckle out of it Silent One! Appreciate the stop by!~Che :)

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry