Juniors Feeding Time

mellow
fellow
yellow
jello

Tot throws at the mellow fellows chair
as Dad primps his yellow jello hair



1-22-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Lol! Che, a humorous and well written tyburn that inspired a smile and a fond memory or two :)) Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Hoffman Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Yep, I remember those days too which is like thirty years ago when my sons were little…no grandkids yet! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan and warm wishes to you too poet friend!~Che :)
Talbot Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Fun tyburn, based on fact I bet! Been there, done it, happy fun days! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poetry, appreciated!
Hoffman Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Thanks so much Mick; I really struggled with this form of poetry so this might be my first and last tyburn lol! This is just a fictional one btw…thanks for kind comment and visit; appreciate it!~Che :)
Horsman Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 2:57 PM
love this, such fun to read.
Hoffman Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Harry; Appreciate it!~Che :)
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 7:21 PM
very amusing Che ... soup mail:) hugs jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Thanks so much Jan; hope tyburn is correct now! hugs che :)
Hauser  Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Bahahaha!
Hoffman Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Hi Mike; glad you got chuckle out of my poem and thanks for visit!~Che :)
One Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 1:56 PM
hahaha... this one is really good!
Hoffman Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and glad you got chuckle out of it Silent One! Appreciate the stop by!~Che :)
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