Jungle War

So thick with rain,the rancid air
into the jungle pours.
Young soldiers with their feet on fire
keep on despite the sores.

This war is one that no one wants
and no one understands.
Young men and women give their lives
in these far Asian lands.

Back home these kids are shown disdain;
they're spit upon and worse.
When they come home from Viet Nam
in airports they are cursed.

A blight upon our history
was this long standing war.
But we should show the vets respect
for suffering they bore.




written by Deb Wilson 
January 12th, 2013
for contest "Historical Modified Quatrain"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/17/2020 1:15:00 AM
Surfing my favourites list Deb, love this powerful poem....Please stay safe....
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Date: 2/14/2013 11:53:00 PM
Another congratulations for a very fine win, Deb! A blight indeed. Well done. Luv,Annalise
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Date: 2/11/2013 2:40:00 AM
This well worded poem conveys well the anamosity and lack of appreciation these soldiers felt and what a sad welcome home many received, especially when they tried to get help for injuries caused by that war. Things have changed because of what they endured. Excellent winning entry Deb. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:49:00 PM
Deb, this is one of my favorite contest... love it... Congratulations, with your amazing poems. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2013 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on poem and win. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/10/2013 6:13:00 PM
How many Vietnam's have we had since the USA was birthed? It's beyond sad. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2013 12:59:00 PM
Indeed a bleak time in American History, when those who paid the price to fight, were ridiculed on our soil. Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 1/20/2013 4:07:00 PM
Good Message!
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:54:00 AM
this is a wonderful poem Deb,, highlighting the mood of the times,, and yes those young men and woman would are sent to do someones elses bidding... they are Hero,, as far as i'm concerned...love this to my fav....
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Date: 1/13/2013 1:25:00 PM
It was and is all too sad for words aye? A good point to highlight. Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:44:00 AM
A great poem by you here Deb.Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:35:00 AM
As a Vietnam vet I can surely appreciate and identify with this fine poem, Deb...although I did not suffer the kind of abuse you mentioned, I know well the accounts of vets being spit on, called 'baby killers' and even assaulted by members and allies of yes, 'The Peace Movement'...most of these protesters were rich, spoiled college brats who didn't have have a clue what the real world was about...I will stop rambling now - Tim
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:01:00 AM
Well said! The vets deserve respect to say the least. One cannot sacrifice ones life for his country and get contempt in return for his services. Beautifully written! Thank you!
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Date: 1/13/2013 9:17:00 AM
Deb, just excellent...David
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