Jungle War

So thick with rain,the rancid air
into the jungle pours.
Young soldiers with their feet on fire
keep on despite the sores.

This war is one that no one wants
and no one understands.
Young men and women give their lives
in these far Asian lands.

Back home these kids are shown disdain;
they're spit upon and worse.
When they come home from Viet Nam
in airports they are cursed.

A blight upon our history
was this long standing war.
But we should show the vets respect
for suffering they bore.




written by Deb Wilson 
January 12th, 2013
for contest "Historical Modified Quatrain"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 1:15 AM
Surfing my favourites list Deb, love this powerful poem....Please stay safe....
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Another congratulations for a very fine win, Deb! A blight indeed. Well done. Luv,Annalise
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 2:40 AM
This well worded poem conveys well the anamosity and lack of appreciation these soldiers felt and what a sad welcome home many received, especially when they tried to get help for injuries caused by that war. Things have changed because of what they endured. Excellent winning entry Deb. Congratulations!
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February 10, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Deb, this is one of my favorite contest... love it... Congratulations, with your amazing poems. Always~ LINDA
Johnson Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Congratulations on poem and win. Love, joyce
Guzzi Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 6:13 PM
How many Vietnam's have we had since the USA was birthed? It's beyond sad. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Squyres Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Indeed a bleak time in American History, when those who paid the price to fight, were ridiculed on our soil. Congrats on your win in the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Good Message!
Horsman Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:54 AM
this is a wonderful poem Deb,, highlighting the mood of the times,, and yes those young men and woman would are sent to do someones elses bidding... they are Hero,, as far as i'm concerned...love this to my fav....
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:25 PM
It was and is all too sad for words aye? A good point to highlight. Light & Love
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:44 AM
A great poem by you here Deb.Enjoyed very much.
Ryerson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:35 AM
As a Vietnam vet I can surely appreciate and identify with this fine poem, Deb...although I did not suffer the kind of abuse you mentioned, I know well the accounts of vets being spit on, called 'baby killers' and even assaulted by members and allies of yes, 'The Peace Movement'...most of these protesters were rich, spoiled college brats who didn't have have a clue what the real world was about...I will stop rambling now - Tim
Trifiatis Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Well said! The vets deserve respect to say the least. One cannot sacrifice ones life for his country and get contempt in return for his services. Beautifully written! Thank you!
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Deb, just excellent...David
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