June's Cosmic Parade

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(NOTE: This is sort of a "found poem" as it's derived from texts in articles about the conjunction of five planets (from a scientific, astronomical POV and an astrological POV). The texts have been manipulated & heavily edited for humorous and surreal effect).

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June’s dreams
you’re the guide
"meet & greet" 
the ecliptic zoo
a must-see!

a new five worldless day
goes on parade
these planets never stand still
click on Mars to tune up
see Mars square Pluto
as it crawls through Capricorn

truth freedom and that
need to capture the planet
of love we had
pay attention to retrograding
Mercury will be found

become mythology 
find your inner mama bear
June is our goal for 
the best telescope

Saturn will
articulate our focus
to take a New Moon 
in 3 weeks Mercury goes direct
will it continue
its tour with me?

Let's message the universe
friend Uranus on Facebook
tweet from Saturn’s rings 
listen to Jupiter laughing at the solar system   

This is it: Friday!
let it rain diamonds
let the planetary parade begin
let the Sun cook the celestial crab


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