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June Moon Is Back

Tanagers in green trees, swinging, Scarlet night of pearl moon, singing, A day's come of age, romance peak, Kitty roams the wall, dark mystique, Blooms lustrous, radiance clinging! Written on 6/4/2022 For: The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 6/14/2022 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A Creative "June Moon is Back" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/14/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of congratulations, Paula. :) Enjoy your evening, Evelyn
Date: 6/13/2022 9:50:00 AM
What a beautiful scene Evelyn painted in rainbow hues. I always love how you use color to evoke your message and set the scene. Blessings my friend!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/13/2022 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind expressions of appreciation, Sam. Have a blessed week, Evelyn
Date: 6/12/2022 11:50:00 PM
Love the rhythm and the images in your poem you wrote for my contest. Thanks for your participation and Congrats.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/13/2022 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, and for the honor of a win. I enjoyed your contest very much. :)
Date: 6/5/2022 10:14:00 AM
I have never used this form and it will be difficult for me as my rhyme is poor.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/5/2022 10:57:00 AM
I enjoyed writing this. I'm so glad you liked it, Victor. :)
Date: 6/5/2022 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful imagery throughout! Tanagers in green tree. Smiles at the kitty. Sweet!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/5/2022 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. :)
Date: 6/5/2022 5:13:00 AM
Charming write, Evelyn. I love the line "Kitty roams the wall, dark mystique". Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/5/2022 9:47:00 AM
Thank you for the joy of your kind comment, Paulette. :)
Date: 6/4/2022 7:26:00 PM
Your painterly pen gone inspired to work again..thank you! Blessings!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2022 9:05:00 PM
You are most welcome, Sally. Thank you for your inspiring thoughts. Blessings.
Date: 6/4/2022 7:25:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You penned such a good write in the Quintilla form. You painted such a lovely scene underneath the moon and it’s surroundings. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2022 9:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your generous remarks, Alexis. I hope your weekend is wonderful, too. :) Evelyn
Date: 6/4/2022 5:58:00 PM
I have never written in this form Evelyn, but this seems like a beauty that will do great in the contest. Blessings xxoo
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2022 9:00:00 PM
This is my first quintilla, Connie. Thank you for your kind compliment. Blessings xxoo

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