June

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The veins of sunlight In the leaves, touching my eyes Like the hand of God

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John Watt

Date: 4/23/2020 7:49:00 PM

Oh, I love this one. To me, the sun has always been a useful metaphor for God: warm, light, far away but its presence is felt. Nice write.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2018 10:48:00 PM

Beautiful imagery that Truly reaches the soul. Great winner, Michelle! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/7/2018 2:17:00 PM

thanks, gw!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2018 3:30:00 PM

What lovely imagery. Well done and congrats on your win, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/7/2018 2:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line!

Lunita Blanca

Date: 2/27/2018 10:22:00 AM

Excellent Michelle

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you for your comment! - Michelle

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/27/2018 8:50:00 AM

This is a beautiful Haiku! Well done :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thank you, you're so kind to leave a comment! Michelle