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June

The veins of sunlight
In the leaves, touching my eyes
Like the hand of God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/26/2025 9:03:00 PM
Your concept was awesome here. Just my opinion but if your line placement were revised, for me it would be a top winner. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 4/23/2020 7:49:00 PM
Oh, I love this one. To me, the sun has always been a useful metaphor for God: warm, light, far away but its presence is felt. Nice write.
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery that Truly reaches the soul. Great winner, Michelle! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/7/2018 2:17:00 PM
thanks, gw!
Date: 3/12/2018 3:30:00 PM
What lovely imagery. Well done and congrats on your win, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/7/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line!
Date: 2/27/2018 10:22:00 AM
Excellent Michelle
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comment! - Michelle
Date: 2/27/2018 8:50:00 AM
This is a beautiful Haiku! Well done :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, you're so kind to leave a comment! Michelle
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