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Strip me of my wealth, I don’t have any Strip me of my power, of endless desire Strip me till I am naked Strip me till all I have to offer is my body and my heart My heart doesn’t belong here I am a being of the snowy lands Where winter reigns and we bow to the fog Where the biggest enemy are the mountains clad in white Tiny white petals Soft petals, fragrant petals These petals touch my skin And leave me thinking of them They tiptoe as quietly as they came Taking with them all I treasure, all I hate And just as I watch them leave from a distance My memories fade away The colour is fading from my hands The vibrant, bright, shiny colours Of the painting I made last week It is time to make a new one I leave all my clothes, my money, my strength My outer covering, my desires, my fires Today I am naked Today I am just body and heart

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Date: 1/27/2020 7:52:00 AM
This is beautiful ??.I told you so
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/27/2020 7:53:00 AM
aww thank you Sankalp!
Date: 1/25/2020 7:27:00 AM
I like the way your words go beyond ordinary-- a gifted write. Congrats on your win.
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/26/2020 5:44:00 AM
thank you so much! I see another Indian yay
Date: 1/24/2020 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations Aditi, on your 6th place win in the "Jump" contest. I found your exploration of what you need interesting and your jumps fitting. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering.
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/26/2020 5:42:00 AM
thank you so much for such a kind judgement!
Date: 1/20/2020 11:41:00 PM
Very interesting write.. Just body and heart... I like the way you took the theme.. But the title!!! By the way, adults can't be stripped naked.. If stripped, no more adult left, just child..lol..
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/21/2020 2:07:00 AM
haha thank you for your views!

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