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July's Torridly

Oh this sweat upon my brow Pours from this weather I must embrace Thick moist air curls my hair and drips from my face Oh the dog days of summer are here Where my clothes are stuck and dirt does adhere Bare foot running across the tar and concrete Burning the soles of my feet Breathless and hot not wanting to move Waiting for a storm to pass over and this oppression to improve My garden finds elation in this humidity Making it leaves grow with great solidity The kids run lemonade stand down the street The elders stop to buy it and beat the heat Tho theses days are short in caparison To view ones perspiration is somewhat embarrassing I am so thankful for my air-conditioning I’m just complaining and petitioning For a brake for this extreme heat And I shall whistle along with my sweet treat Oh this sweat upon my brow Pours from this weather I must embrace Thick moist air curls my hair and drips from my face I guess I shall inhere to July and it’s slower pace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/29/2008 7:01:00 PM
where i come from iowa it was always hot and humid. here in colorado it is hot but not humid, but sometimes it is, but nothing compared to iowa. this was a great poem and thank you for reading my poety and for your comments
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Date: 7/26/2008 5:58:00 PM
I have this love affair with summer and the ocean. Whenever it gets too hot and mucky, I remind myself that I don't have to shovel heat. Winter is a different story. Good write. Vince
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Date: 7/22/2008 4:40:00 AM
This is very real and so very clear. Yes, it's been hot hot HOT around here, but the imagery you create is a cool diversion to the heat. Wonderfully expressed. Michael
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Date: 7/21/2008 7:38:00 PM
wow thats good im officially a fan LOL
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Date: 7/21/2008 5:29:00 PM
It certainly has been hot in these parts this year - Combine that with the smoke and ash and its been quite miserable - blessings
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Date: 7/21/2008 4:44:00 PM
Hi Laura You paint the perfect picture of July for most folks. Here in Alaska where I live it's 65 degrees and been raining for a week. I'm ready to do a reverse rain dance ha! Sun we need here....Stay cool hun! Enjoyed this beautiful, well written poem with great flow and ryhme very much! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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