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July's Sticky Air

I fled the kiln
of the house
where ceramic floors
bake like focaccia bread.
My haven is a bench
in the shade of an oak,
praying for a breeze.
A bevy of bees hover
over blushing jasmine 
and scarlet lilies,
dousing me with honey
in July's sticky air
as my finger
culls a drowned earwig
from my glass of iced tea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Dale, I love the intimate imagery in your poetic slice of life. You've illuminate these moments on a hot July day beautifully.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Oh Dale another awesome gem:-) I loved the imagery especially of the floors and the oak tree until i got to that pesky earwig in the glass, I don't like bugs they really are a pain!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Especially in my tea!!!!! Thanks, Jan.
Pandit Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Excellent imagery..awesome details..simply beautiful, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay.
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