July Storm

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Quick tornado in July Where stardom shatters Guide us as a guest We grumble in the heat Sprinkle droplets before they fly Any brilliant visitor will be delighted Regardless, it currently triumphs flawlessly We appear as the ones who are solving Have you grown tired of inconstancy? Then, there is what lies ahead of us in reality The wind is blowing hard

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Ann Foster

Date: 7/12/2022 10:35:00 AM

there is what lies ahead... oh yes. The storm is coming. No one will be spared. Love this. Really enjoy the picture. It was a breath... all by itself. Ann

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2022 5:37:00 AM

We are seeing many of these lately. You captured the sights and sounds of July storms well in this poem my friend.

Valsa George

Date: 7/6/2022 8:00:00 PM

Tornadoes come quite unexpected and they are so frightening, causing a lot of destruction ! Beautifully composed, dear friend !