July Rain

Every now and then,
a tear appears in my eye
when I think back 
of beautiful you and July.

You were mine once,
but I lost you in the fray;
my head was hung low 
when you set your wedding day.

I knew you looked stunning
in your white gown and train;
after that, my days were
filled with cold, driven rain.

You are always in my eye,
it should have been us that July.


For "Secondhand Emotion" contest sponsored by Dana'lynn Smith.

By: George Aul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/17/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations George on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:18:00 PM
Congrats, George. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 7:05:00 PM
wow -I can feel that! great write George. congrats on your HM
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:23:00 PM
I can just hear the Brooklyn Bridge with their hit song "Worst That Could Happen" as I read this piece. Johnny Maestro's voice is now coming in loud and clear. Good writing, George.
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:43:00 AM
Very sad but very sweet. I like it. Love, Sarah
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Date: 1/7/2012 11:13:00 PM
Sad, wish it had worked out for you..and me...lol...nice rhymes..BG
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