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July Fourth

JULY 4TH I hate to say it but “In the old days – (will all the ancient folk ever tire of retelling?) July 4th was a big BIG day! Up at crack-of-dawn if you were a kid With red salutes 4 inches round 6 inches long You could blow a tin can as high as the phone wires Bounce torpedoes off the neighbor’s brick garage Few ever complained because most everyone was doing it Except for Hattie and Maude two ancient sisters who lived behind their broken down green board fence They complained – said the kids collapsed their stupid broken down green board fence (which everyone knew had been leaning for years) ‘Done it with them there awful fire crackers’ said Maude ‘You better believe it!’ said Hattie At night the little ones were out on the front lawns whirling sparklers clear on down the block The city sky was a riot of showering colors clear on downtown And the NOISE! If there’s been a band around Sousa’s Stars and Stripes Forever would’ve drowned No it was one continuous canons blasting – the end of 1812 Around about 10: P.M. just after dark The little ones spent and in spite of the noise Dropped onto their beds too tired to even undress

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/5/2010 12:28:00 PM
WAs 1812 another reference to your age, DAver? heeheehee. (JUST kidding) You know I love you!!! THis is awesome writing, my good friend. Here was my favorite line: The city sky was a riot of showering colors (I just love when you use lines like that) Keep writing, and never never grow up or grow old! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:43:00 AM
We have the same celebration on a different day here in Canada, but I celebrate July 4th too. Thanks for brining back the mmories. My favorite firework was one called 'The School House'. How we loved to watched it fly into the night sky and explode in a shower of sizzling, fizzling sparks that turned to ashes on the ground. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:38:00 AM
I'd like to think the kids helped those grumpy old ladies repair their fence, but kids are kids. This was a fun trip back to yesteryear, Daver. Though my parents never let us near fireworks, many neighborhood children created lots of noisy explosions that surely would have drowned out the Stars and Stripes. Have a fantastic holiday, Daver! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:06:00 AM
I felt as if I were watching those old ladies in a movie....I can just see those pinched up faces, scowling at those kids, and the kids...one with red hair maybe? and the other with a cowlick, and his little brother with freckles wearing huge eyes, having the time of their lives...ahhh....what a wonderful picture you have painted!! Like a Norman Rockwell....loved this!!!!! :)
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Date: 7/4/2010 5:56:00 AM
wow! what a 4th memory,, how about the little history here nice story Daver A., really enjoyed you sharing this with us..on this lovely day..As for me i will be in bed by 10:00p.m. no chance of celebrating.. we got rained out...have a nice 4th of July,,, and stay of of I- 75,..yae care,..Sidney LeeAnn
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