July 5th, 1996

The Fourth rose hard fire tracing lines across the sky
Then you went quiet slipping past the noise without reply
Vietnam lived in you like a shadow that never left
A war carried inward silent disciplined and deft

At fifty you stepped out of the world with no parade
While fireworks kept burning blind to the cost you paid
Now each July Fourth stands rigid cold and bright
And July Fifth returns thirty years held in that light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:58 PM
An impactful poem. Says so much about all veterans who put so much on the line for their country. Such great cost of war!
Delegans Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:17 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Definitely a lot sacrificed during and after.
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 8:47 PM
What an awful price too many paid for that war. A moving write, Christopher.
Delegans Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:18 PM
Indeed an awful price. Thanks for the visit, Gershon.
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 11:46 AM
Our time in Viet Nam was long and paid with a terrible price. I am saddened at your loss. Did your father die in Nam or did he die later as a result of his time spent there. Sara K.
Delegans Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:20 PM
Thanks for the visit and kind words, Sara. He died long after his time there at the age of 50 over thirty years ago. He was exposed to agent orange, and had life long mental health issues resulting from the war.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 3:47 PM
the Vietnam War still lives in my husband--such is the cost of war.
Delegans Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 8:33 AM
Please pass along thanks from me for his service. It was a tough time for many. Thanks for the visit, Sara.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 11:22 AM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Great Ending... So Sorry.. It was a hard/hell time for many. Have a blessed day writing away..........
Delegans Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Thank you, Paula. Appreciate the kind words.
Jones Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 2:13 AM
A great write with empathy for Vietnam vets. Enjoyed!
Delegans Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 9:11 PM
Thank you for the visit and sharing kind words, Karen.
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