Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

July 4 2016

Memory of my grandson at 6 years old

July 4th 2016

cache extra cuteness
courting field of coneflowers
purple purity
cute as button upturned smile
stirs boy’s long hair and wild grass

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I Am Anaya July 9, 2024 at 12:49 PM A memory for a lifetime, Kim. A lucky grandson to have you poetess. Imagery is captivating! Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2024 at 1:19 PM Thank you, Anaya! Hugs ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf July 5, 2024 at 4:02 PM This is, indeed, a lovely image for the fourth. Brings us back to America's roots -- for amber waves of grain! Bravo, Kim! Kim Rodrigues July 5, 2024 at 7:45 PM Thank you so much! I enjoy what the reader reads into it! :)

Paige Hind July 5, 2024 at 11:01 AM Awwww, this is so cute! Thanks for sharing- Kim Rodrigues July 5, 2024 at 3:42 PM Thank you, Paige! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 5, 2024 at 7:48 AM Dear Kim, How I loved your cute Tanka poem of your grandson. I enjoyed my 4th with my three granddaughters. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Kim Rodrigues July 5, 2024 at 3:45 PM So glad you had a great time with your 3 granddaughters! This was a quiet 4th for me…lol. I’ll take it…I know I will be busy soon enough. Bless you!

Silent One July 4, 2024 at 11:20 AM Sounds like great memories of 2016.. Kim Rodrigues July 5, 2024 at 7:01 AM Thank you! We forget moments that photos bring back. :)