Juju the Magical Whale

Step aside if you please, Dr. Seuss,
And you as well my dear Mother Goose!
It's my turn to write for little kids a silly tale,
About a magical whale and his little friend, Miss Abigail!

JuJu was his name and he was as big as a whaling ship!
He cruised about the sea with Miss Abigail reclining on his lip!
She enjoyed the view as they dove to the bottom of the sea,
To say "Howdy do!" to Claus Lobster and have a spot o' tea!

JuJu took Miss Abigail for a cruise along the Barbary Coast.
There they saw a pirate ship guarded by a fearsome ghost!
"Never mind," a lovely mermaid said!  "If the truth were told,
He'd gladly let you play in his treasure chest filled with gold!"

Alas, poor JuJu fell fast asleep and nigh Bermuda bumped a stone,
Spilling poor Miss Abigail into the sea, leaving her all alone!
JuJu awoke with a startled cry searching for his little friend.
With his magic eyes he spotted her faraway nigh Newfoundland!

With a flip of his magic tail, JuJu could swim hither and yon so free,
Showing Miss Abigail wonderful and mysterious things beneath the sea!
(Miss Abigail awoke from her fun-filled dream to tell her Mom and Dad,
All about Magical JuJu and the whale of a time she'd had!)

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved

Placed No. 5 in Gwendolen's "Dr. Seuss Is On The Loose" Contest - Feb 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/12/2012 3:08:00 AM
BOB H.,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Login to Reply
Date: 2/8/2012 5:25:00 AM
Nephews gave it a thumbs up Robert and were laughing still as I took them to school xx
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 7:12:00 PM
Hi Bob..I had to rush off to work last evening without a congratulatory note. 4 judges and some super stiff competition. You were scored as 1st place by 1 of the four judges. Each entry was read out loud and the giggle meter ruled the day..This story is magical, funny, a rhyming delight. Loved the names of your characters and the best line was Miss Abigail reclining on his lip...Now, I can just see this image as a child and it drew me into a huge daydream. Congrats again. You did great! GWendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 2:01:00 PM
Bob - this would make a pretty good picture book. Congratulations on the placement. Mike
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Gwen's "Dr. Seuss" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 5:00:00 AM
congrats Robert, this is a wonderful story. harry
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 1:25:00 AM
Nice one Robert. my nephews are going to have fun reading these tomorrow before I take them to school. Congratulations x
Login to Reply
Date: 2/4/2012 8:33:00 AM
oh how inventive Bob.. truly a story all kis would luv to hear over and over again.. luv the character names.. a definite winning wonder ,y friend.. good luck.. we have no snow.. oh am so glad.. hope u are coping with all that white stuff luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2012 4:18:00 PM
Great tale of the sea..Reads like winners' circle to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read on a Friday eve..Good enough to be published as a children's tale if you got the right person to illustrate or could you do that also?...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2012 11:23:00 AM
A delightful tale, Bob. it could be illustrated in a children's book!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/2/2012 2:00:00 PM
Love this fun piece, my friend. Hope all is well with you and Vera
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2012 8:39:00 PM
Dear Bob H., it is very nice to finally see a picture of you... Now, i can put a face with your wonderful poetry... about your poem: I truly am glad I read this one..love the spirit in it... good luck in the contest,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2012 3:06:00 PM
I have just read the winner of the Dr. Seuss contest I am sure. Great story, Bob. I sent you a soup mail.Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2012 6:00:00 AM
Awww I don't have a chance now in the Zuess contest LOL..look at the grand tale you did! Mine was meant to be read by a child LOL & illustrated! Great work NOW please enter 4 lines in my contest you can use almost any of your quatrains just put what meter you think it's in on the bottom. I will check it for you ;) Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 1/31/2012 2:37:00 AM
Thanks, Bob. Nice to see your pic up there. Good luck in Gwendolen's contest! Great poem with lots of imagination. God bless, Maureen
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2012 12:15:00 PM
This was a pleasant poem Robert. -oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Date: 1/29/2012 9:07:00 PM
Many of Dr. Seuss's writings were being released in hardcover when I was in elementary school. However, I don't recall this story. Nevertheless, you have described everything well here with good rhyming as usual Bob.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/29/2012 7:07:00 PM
wonderful adventure story Robert, good luck in contest, best wishes Elizabeth
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter