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Juicy Kaboosey

her derriere 
in the air high
eyes wearing out





Than-Bauk written for Rick Parise's contest

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John Aaron Green

November 29, 2011 at 10:41 PM

this is so kool,,,wonderful creation.....

Poet Destroyer A

November 28, 2011 at 8:14 PM

J.S.LAMBERT,, STOPPING BY TO SAY HI! still a nice smile your poems bring to mind..Enjoyed;-) Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

November 25, 2011 at 3:15 PM

lol.. nice one ....smiles... Chiquita

Doris Culverhouse

November 18, 2011 at 8:54 PM

guys and gals.....cracked pots the lot

Russell Sivey

November 18, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Sorry JS, I'm not used to commenting on your poetry. I know that is not a valid excuse, but I'll try to comment on all the new poems. I'll try and find them and from now on I'll be able to comment on them as it is in my brain to do so. Hey, congrats on your victory in this contest, Awesome. Wonderful write JS, I see why this was picked as one of the placements...Great work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 6:14 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest JS. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

November 17, 2011 at 5:52 PM

Late congrats on your well deserved win, ~JSLambert Domo arigato MR.ROBOTOthkUvm. You made me smile today!

Joe Maverick

November 17, 2011 at 12:15 PM

Congratulations on the win you have achieved...J S L.

Carrie Richards

November 17, 2011 at 8:50 AM

How can one not love this and smile!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 17, 2011 at 2:12 AM

Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, JS

Joyce Johnson

November 16, 2011 at 7:07 PM

Great work. Congratulations. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

November 16, 2011 at 2:12 PM

Gosh, for me, YOURS was like THE one to beat!! One of the very best, my friend. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

Gwendolen Song

November 16, 2011 at 1:32 PM

Congrats on this winning write. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

November 16, 2011 at 1:30 PM

I knew Rick would enjoy your poem, Joey. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 15, 2011 at 6:14 AM

LOL I can see it...in a French Impressionist's painting...ladies in the park just like this! LOl (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Carolyn Devonshire

November 14, 2011 at 4:01 PM

Oh, this is awesome, Joey! Gave me quite a giggle. Wishing you success in Rick's contest. Also, I've been having phone/internet problems so I just read and responded to your Soup mails. Love, Carolyn

Tara Beach

November 13, 2011 at 4:51 PM

lol. ur silly :P .. and yes i will comment and let u know when i have written something new... i usually wait for something to hit me, i don't force my poetry.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 13, 2011 at 10:58 AM

haha! funky title, juicy indeed! What a very entertaining than-bauk this, is JS :) and hmmm that must be some butt, to wear the eyes out like that O_o... and oh shucks, I read kash's comment below, I'm afraid he's right-- for the 3rd line, the rhyme should be in the 2nd syllable... how about something like "eyes wearing out" -- btw I am loving your new name :D

Kash Poet

November 13, 2011 at 7:07 AM

Very nice.But I have doubt over the rhyming syllable of 3rd line:wea/RING--ring is supposed to rhyme with*ere* and*air*.Thanks for your kind comment at my page.