Constance La France Poet Jueju

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Jueju and Qijue

 

In the night sky, a full moon-
it's beauty will be gone soon
and hidden by drifting clouds
creeping- grey stillness enshrouds.

And I lay in bed waiting
as moon baths me in bright light,
I feel it soothing my soul
until-  behind grey it fades.

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November 12, 2016

Poetry/Jueju/Qijue
Copyright Protected, ID 16-849-438-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for Contest # 237
sponsor, Brian Strand


Fifth Place

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Francis J Grasso November 17, 2016 at 8:31 AM Beautiful ... Congratulations Constance. ...Fran

James Inman November 16, 2016 at 8:16 AM I like the tone of this one BW. Your last line describes me well.

Janice Canerdy November 15, 2016 at 1:43 PM Lovely images, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice

Sandra Haight November 15, 2016 at 9:20 AM Beautiful, tranquil imagery about our majestic Moon, Constance, and I like the form too. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Joanna Daniel November 15, 2016 at 6:30 AM A big congratulations on your splendid win, Constance:)

Mark Martin November 15, 2016 at 12:36 AM Enjoyed this! Congrats! :-)

Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2016 at 9:55 PM Lovely, Constance! Congrats!

Duke Beaufort November 13, 2016 at 3:05 PM This morning is supposed to have a full moon called a perigee-syzygy. A really big super moon. So, interesting that your feelings and instincts had you write this. Interesting.

Joanna Daniel November 13, 2016 at 5:07 AM Sheer beauty, Constance:) loved the new forms you tried out:)