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Jueju and Qijue

 

In the night sky, a full moon-
it's beauty will be gone soon
and hidden by drifting clouds
creeping- grey stillness enshrouds.

And I lay in bed waiting
as moon baths me in bright light,
I feel it soothing my soul
until-  behind grey it fades.

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November 12, 2016

Poetry/Jueju/Qijue
Copyright Protected, ID 16-849-438-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for Contest # 237
sponsor, Brian Strand


Fifth Place

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Francis J Grasso Date: 11/17/2016 8:31:00 AM Beautiful ... Congratulations Constance. ...Fran Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 11/16/2016 8:16:00 AM I like the tone of this one BW. Your last line describes me well. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/15/2016 1:43:00 PM Lovely images, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/15/2016 9:20:00 AM Beautiful, tranquil imagery about our majestic Moon, Constance, and I like the form too. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/15/2016 6:30:00 AM A big congratulations on your splendid win, Constance:) Login to Reply

Mark Martin Date: 11/15/2016 12:36:00 AM Enjoyed this! Congrats! :-) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/14/2016 9:55:00 PM Lovely, Constance! Congrats! Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 11/13/2016 3:05:00 PM This morning is supposed to have a full moon called a perigee-syzygy. A really big super moon. So, interesting that your feelings and instincts had you write this. Interesting. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/13/2016 5:07:00 AM Sheer beauty, Constance:) loved the new forms you tried out:) Login to Reply