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Judging World

Standing right in front of a judge makes you feel uncertain about yourself, afraid that the next thing to hear is the eerie sound of a judge's wooden hammer on his table. Eyes in a city, park, street, mall....judge the way you look, walk, and dress. Words flicker in the eyes like signals from a lighthouse. It feels like you are in a court where everyone is a judge without a wooden hammer, with proceedings that never end...... Date: 23/07/2015

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Date: 7/23/2015 10:22:00 AM
Well said, Teddy. I recognize this style now. I see why Charlotte liked your entry to her contest. You write with deep perception of things. This is not an entry, right? The contest is for a senryu. Kim :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/23/2015 10:26:00 AM
Hi Kim. Thank you for enjoying my piece. I thought Andrea wanted a free verse.I didn't realize it's senryu, lol.