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Judgement

each sleight is the haunt 
of some evicted ghost.
grieving me a life of greater pain;
I see pieces of people passing, 
drifting into the footsteps 
of another future. 
I feel the rough sand-paper surface 
of the concrete bridge 
as I  prepare to jump. 
For a moment my heart slumps.  
It takes the smallest of memories 
to interrupt a courage. 
I thought each flower finer 
in a different way, 
if there’s a word for that, 
I cannot say.  
Far more acute 
than any thing precise,  
far more astute 
than scholarly advice. 
Is there a right kind of poetry?
  
In a room far away 
behind a desk in an office, 
someone decides.
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Brewer Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Haunting lines of mystery and sensitive observation. The final stanza strikes a harmonic of discord and magnetic attention hold.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Your not wrong Vernon, always the spectre of someone behind a desk, making life and death decisions for everyone else, a wonderful piece of free verse, it digs deep inside, cheers David
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