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each sleight is the haunt of some evicted ghost. grieving me a life of greater pain; I see pieces of people passing, drifting into the footsteps of another future. I feel the rough sand-paper surface of the concrete bridge as I prepare to jump. For a moment my heart slumps. It takes the smallest of memories to interrupt a courage. I thought each flower finer in a different way, if there’s a word for that, I cannot say. Far more acute than any thing precise, far more astute than scholarly advice. Is there a right kind of poetry? In a room far away behind a desk in an office, someone decides.

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Date: 3/25/2022 6:35:00 AM
Haunting lines of mystery and sensitive observation. The final stanza strikes a harmonic of discord and magnetic attention hold.
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Date: 3/7/2022 1:10:00 PM
Your not wrong Vernon, always the spectre of someone behind a desk, making life and death decisions for everyone else, a wonderful piece of free verse, it digs deep inside, cheers David
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