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Jude

Jude
Jude was shrewd.
Jude was shrewd with turpitude.
Shrewd Jude with turpitude had a bad attitude.
Shrewd Jude with turpitude and a bad attitude moved to another latitude.
Shrewd Jude with turpitude and a bad attitude moved to another latitude and a longitude.
Shrewd Jude with turpitude and a bad attitude who moved to another latitude and longitude developed lassitude.
Shrewd Jude with turpitude and a bad attitude who moved to another latitude and longitude and developed lassitude discovered crude.
When shrewd Jude with turpitude and a bad attitude who moved to another latitude and longitude, developed lassitude and discovered crude,
he was confronted by the IRS and got screwed.

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Skat A Date: 7/1/2013 10:24:00 PM this is a nice smiling winning poem.............. SKAT Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 6/28/2013 2:56:00 PM Robert congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 6/27/2013 5:07:00 PM Yeah, there's a lot of that goin' around... Nice writing, my friend,...... Jake Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/26/2013 5:17:00 PM Robert, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun closing my contest ... ""SMILE""- Take care and enjoy my blog if you like... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/5/2012 1:00:00 PM Clever write, Robert - I find monorhymes very difficult indeed, but you made it look so easy! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/5/2012 12:55:00 PM Nice one Robert but I think you could have used two more words in the last line ie Shrew Jude got screwed, not that I know anything but it would have finished it for me. xx Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/5/2012 10:58:00 AM delightful to the max, robert... you can make a riddle look so easssy!... this is a rhyme or monorhyme.. winning huggs of for a contest!..:) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/5/2012 3:57:00 AM Robert well done ,very clever , I agree with Nikko, Monorhyme..David Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/5/2012 12:36:00 AM Wow! What a very fascinating read this is and how cool that this made so much sense :) Loved how you ended this--- hmm could this be listed as monorhyme? Way to go for this very cool write, Robert! Login to Reply