Jubilee

I soared upon a seagull’s wings to hear a sailor’s song
      euphoric in my jubilee while dolphins sang along. 







Written on 3/5/2017

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Richard Evans

January 22, 2022 at 10:28 AM

Amazing. So visual and rhythmic. Thanks for sharing............peace!

Laura Leiser

January 22, 2022 at 6:47 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, Richard! I appreciate it! :)

Paulette Calasibetta

October 27, 2021 at 1:10 PM

Wow.... Your imagery takes me upon a "seagull's wings"and I can hear the dolphins sing! Extraordinary!!! Blessings, Paulette

Laura Leiser

October 27, 2021 at 5:20 PM

Thanks so much, Paulette! So glad you liked this one! :)

John Watt

October 14, 2021 at 10:41 PM

Love the oceanic imagery you use, the exquisite meter and the musical theme. Perfect for a trophy win. Congratulations, dear friend, it was well earned.

Laura Leiser

October 15, 2021 at 7:44 AM

Thanks so much, John! This couplet came from my poem, Soup Bubble Dreams that I wrote awhile back. So happy it could stand on its own!

Susan Ashley

October 12, 2021 at 10:30 AM

Dear Laura, my heart’s imagination is soaring on euphoric wings through realms of revelry, beauty and song!! Your poem is exquisite, my dear friend. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley

October 12, 2021 at 3:06 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Laura. You’re a stellar poet amongst the stars, my dear friend, and your poem is a huge fav!

Laura Leiser

October 12, 2021 at 10:42 AM

Thank you for being so complimentary, Susan! Your thoughtful words mean so much to me, coming from a great poet like you! :)

Christuraj Alex

October 7, 2021 at 9:42 AM

It's a very beautiful and highly poetic couplet.

Laura Leiser

October 7, 2021 at 8:18 PM

Thank you, Christuraj! :)

James Marshall Goff

October 6, 2021 at 1:20 PM

Lyrical fantasia Laura, congrats!

Laura Leiser

October 6, 2021 at 8:23 PM

Thank you, James! :)

Sam Kauffman

October 6, 2021 at 10:47 AM

What a delightful duet, Laura! Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings.

Laura Leiser

October 6, 2021 at 8:23 PM

Thanks so much, Sam! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

October 6, 2021 at 9:58 AM

This is really joyful, I love this! Congratulations!

Laura Leiser

October 6, 2021 at 8:23 PM

Thank you, BJ! :)

Kim Rodrigues

October 6, 2021 at 7:01 AM

Awesome! Congratulations!

Laura Leiser

October 6, 2021 at 8:23 PM

Thank you, Kim! So happy you liked this! :)

Paul Callus

October 1, 2021 at 1:24 PM

This is excellent, Laura! You paint such a beautiful picture in just two lines! ~ Congratulations on claiming a very deserved trophy. ~ Regards // paul

Laura Leiser

October 1, 2021 at 5:41 PM

Thank you so much much, Paul! I’m very happy that you liked this! God bless! :)

Regina Mcintosh

September 30, 2021 at 4:04 PM

Beautiful. I love it!!! God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Laura Leiser

September 30, 2021 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Gina! I’m so happy you liked this one! God bless you! :)

Paula Goldsmith

September 30, 2021 at 11:32 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Jubilee" is a wonderful write. I love it and your seagull’s/dolphins. Have a blessed day.................

Laura Leiser

September 30, 2021 at 1:39 PM

Thanks so much, Paula. So happy you liked this one! :)

Francis J Grasso

September 30, 2021 at 9:27 AM

Beautifully expressed, Laura! I love this style of poetry! Congratulations on this win! ...Fran

Laura Leiser

September 30, 2021 at 1:40 PM

Thanks so much, Francis! I’m happy I liked this one! :)

Avery Won

September 29, 2021 at 4:52 AM

Beautifully said <3

Laura Leiser

September 29, 2021 at 7:54 AM

Thank you, Avery! :)

Joanna Daniel

September 28, 2021 at 11:50 PM

Brilliant couplet, Laura, congratulations:)

Laura Leiser

September 29, 2021 at 7:54 AM

Thank you, Jo. Thrilled that you enjoyed this one! :)

Michelle Faulkner

September 28, 2021 at 8:45 PM

I love seagulls and dolphins, and the flow of the rhymes is delightful, congratulations on your first place win!

Laura Leiser

September 29, 2021 at 7:53 AM

Thank you, Michelle! Do happy you liked it! :)

Beata Agustin

September 28, 2021 at 7:36 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Laura Leiser

September 28, 2021 at 8:04 PM

Thank you, Beata! So happy you liked this little couplet! :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 28, 2021 at 5:06 PM

awesome!!! Congrats

Laura Leiser

September 28, 2021 at 8:04 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I’m happy you liked this one! :)

Edward Ibeh

September 28, 2021 at 12:48 PM

Wow, this is such a sublime piece! It's so deserving of the top spot win, Laura:-) Heartiest congratulations!

Laura Leiser

September 28, 2021 at 12:56 PM

Thanks so much, Edward. So happy you liked this! :)

L Milton Hankins

September 28, 2021 at 9:35 AM

Laura, I was quite taken by your poem when I first read it. A lover of the sea and all things maritime, it was particularly delightful. And, of course, who doesn't love dolphins! It was perfect in every way, and I am happily awarding you the trophy for this wonderful couplet.

Laura Leiser

September 28, 2021 at 12:02 PM

Thank you so very much for placing my poem first in your contest, Milton! I am “jubilant” over this win! :) I also love the sea, and we have a sailboat and enjoy being on the ocean..a very inspiring place to be! Thanks again, this made my day!!