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Joy Within

Where has that joy source gone the one I thought was infinite taken for granted dried up like youth One shovelful of dirt after another one disappointment too many finally crushing that little joyful kid inside as if casually extinguishing nothing more than a campfire Why should joy and hope be so threatening to these stubborn people with their big feet wielding their power just being mean I want to leave this world where it’s a sport for big people to crush the little ones I want to move and live among gentler folk the ones who need to live their joy have ambitions and aren’t afraid to smile I want to wear my hopes and speak my dreams I want to move and live in a world where all the little people go around free spreading wide the wings of their big soul AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on May 3, 2018 for contest EARLY MAY STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 5/6/2018 8:42:00 PM
I want to go with you to this joyful place Line. Let’s go now!
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:10:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. I'll be by to pick you up later. LOL
Date: 5/4/2018 10:05:00 AM
May you live in a world of Bliss and thrive in Beauty! A well penned write dripping with genuine wishes and emotions. Stay blessed dear Line.
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Besma. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/4/2018 9:54:00 AM
I, too, want to live with the "little people - who live their joy" and "spread the wings of their big soul" - simply magnificent - must make this a Fav!
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/4/2018 2:23:00 AM
Thought provoking verse line, it takes me back to my carefree days as a carefree child full of happiness and joy. Back then bad news didn't apply, that was for grown ups. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 5/4/2018 12:31:00 AM
I hope this places with him. A very good entry.
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Date: 5/4/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Much appreciated visit and comment.

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