Joy To World Within

Omnipresent is Joy
Barefoot morn walk in garden
Soothing sight of silky blanket of grass
Morning dew globules sparkling 
As if bathing Blades in freshness
Greenery splashed on earths canvas 

Buds swinging, radiant Natures canvas
Eager to unlock youth freshness  
Flowers gleeful as butterflies perch joyfully 
Esoteric on pollination in garden
Fragrance radiating, amidst grass 
Aroma filled atmospheres sparkling 
   
First Rays splashing golden on natures canvas 
Aiding photosynthesis,energy joyful 
Plant and human balancing ecological freshness 
Plants in orderly arrangement in garden 
Seeds germinating in silence with invisible sparkle
Sacrifice, seed for tree, uneven blades for uniform grass    
 
Mountains, rocks forever fresh
Treasure of minerals,herbs,grass
Wall to rain bearing clouds,life of many gardens
Mother to many rivers, oasis in natures canvas
Treasure of minerals, herbs, grass
Seat of saints for Peaceful joy 
Protecting ecological sparkle

Changing of Seasons add sparkle 
Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, varied freshness 
Spice to atmospheric environment joy
Enthusiasm for new clothes, cuisine, party on grass 
Nature bestowed different seasons canvas 
Knowing, human love variety as desert love garden

Compassion garden
Love dotting rest of emotions as on blades dews sparkle
Inner light dispelling darkness in lifes canvas
Smiles, hugs, kisses, pats, way forward fresh
Individual joy as gardens each blade of grass 
Spreading garden of cosmic joy  
     
Futile is garden without dews sparkle  
Cheer is soul of lifes canvas, inner search only lends freshness   
Inner bliss smooth as silky grass, search futile for outward search of joy  
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© Hitendra Mehta
(Entry for Members Contest - "Joy to World” by Deborah Guzzi)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/15/2013 6:02:00 PM
did I ever tell you how much I liked your poem ME Still as a Statue? I am having a fave contest for all my fave poems to be on a list of honor. If you submit it soon enough it will be on the list. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/9/2010 5:30:00 PM
What you will notice about the end word pattern is the last word in line 6 is also the last word in line 7...so...THAT pattern repeats through the first six verses...you are still not using the right end words in the right place dear? The second verse should end with grass on line 12 and the first line of verse 3 should end with grass....etc I'll keep checking back. Light & Love
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:45:00 AM
Dear new friend, you started off on the wrong foot..each verse but the last must have 6 lines, your first verse has only five. You are also not understanding the concept of end word repetition. Please check your soup mail for help! Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:15:00 AM
I think I have sent you the wrong link, but please you can check and read the blog with the title "CLARIFICATION OF MY NAME" if you can't find, let me know and I will help you via soupmail ;)
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:13:00 AM
This one is also nice. You're a good poet. And yes, please call me Amaan :) and I request you to read my blog here on PS to know why ;) here's the link, please read when you get time: http://poetrysoup.com/poetry_blog/blog_detail.aspx?PoetID=9603&BlogID=7305
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:33:00 AM
SOUP MAIL..HItendra.. happy day to u..luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:44:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this wonderful expressive work..I was glad that you stopped by and let me know that I had placed in the worst poem conteat..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:43:00 AM
SOUP MAIL..new luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:25:00 AM
Yes, you are right joy is within, outside is futile, great expressions, Hitendra and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/21/2010 7:24:00 AM
So so beautiful........joy is within.... is such an insightful message Hitendra!!
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:34:00 AM
a lovely entry,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:16:00 AM
very nice Hitendra..best of luck in the contest..Take care~Deb
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Date: 11/20/2010 7:48:00 AM
Hitendra, I had a hard time with the sestina form too. Why don't you send a soup mail to Deb Guzzi and ask for some input on the form. She had me rewrite mine twice and has been offering input to some others here. She leaves today for a trip to Egypt, but I bet she'll give you some advice on the form when she has a chance to read your mail. She's been helpful to people attempting this difficult verse form. I really like the message in your poem very much! Beautifully worded - Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:39:00 AM
You have a good heart, Hitendra, and good values as well. Very wise to realize that joy must come from within to be lasting -- so many pursue fleeting happiness. Excellent entry for Deb's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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