Joy of Springtime

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as snow is melting emerald buds show on trees gemmed blooms are peeking intensity sun in the orange days shining refreshes plum lives Written on 6/6/2023 For: Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dilly Dally

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 11:14:00 AM

Cute one Evelyn. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/12/2023 11:20:00 AM

I appreciate your warm remarks, Dilly Dally. I enjoyed your fun, exciting contest very much. Kindest regards

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/12/2023 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Exclusively painted with your style, dear Evelyn- xhugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/12/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Anaya. hugs :)

Bill Baker

Date: 6/10/2023 3:37:00 PM

Lovely imagery and explaination, Evelyn, a good entry for the contest. Good luck my friend. Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/10/2023 7:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Bill. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/8/2023 6:29:00 AM

Aptly done for the contest theme--I see the images in the first haiku as intended. And the second haiku tells the story succinctly.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/8/2023 11:50:00 AM

Your gracious remarks are most appreciated. Thank you.