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Joy Hope and Kindness

Joy a playful toy                                                                           
Over the hills played by a boy                                                        
Yellow ball was his decoy                                                                         




Hope can you cope                                                                                                      Over the long jump rope                                                                                                                   People many say nope                                        
Everyone will slid down the slope                                                                                                           
                                                                                                                                              



Kindness kids need to express                                                                            In life without stress                                                                     
No one needs to be pressed                                                                                                                  Day and night they need to be blessed                                                                                                                                    
Never make a mess                                                                                                                                                             Each kid needs love and must not guess                                                                                                                                                    Say nice things~wear a halo headdress                                                         Sorry if this did not impress                                                                    


Date Written: 1/24/2022
Note: A Rhyme Acrostic Write.

1 Place

Joy, Hope and kindness Contest Judged: 2/20/2022 
Sponsored by: Angela Tune

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Date: 2/1/2022 3:30:00 PM
Very nice acrostic poem, Paula…Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Acrostic one. Have a blessed day....................
Date: 1/25/2022 11:24:00 AM
You chose 3 very special words for your acrostic, each one worth just as much as the other, your poem is so precious, all true my dear . Have a great day Paul :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2022 8:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Rhyme Acrostic write. You are so right, "each one worth just as much as the other." They are. Have a blessed day....................
Date: 1/24/2022 8:22:00 PM
Hi Paula, A beautifully composed Acrostic, musically rhyming and spreading love, hope and kindness !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this Rhyme Acrostic one. Have a blessed day.........
Date: 1/24/2022 5:18:00 PM
A fine Acrostic with good advice for raising a well adjusted child. Kids learn what they live. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, "Kids learn what they live." So very true. Have a blessed day.........
Date: 1/24/2022 1:23:00 PM
Your acrostic is delightful! I especially love the way you created a trio Joy, Hope and Kindness~very clever. I enjoyed this immensely. Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2022 7:38:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my Rhyme Acrostic write. Have a blessed day.........................
Date: 1/24/2022 12:36:00 PM
Expertly crafted, Paula, I enjoyed reading this great poem. My very best regards
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2022 12:44:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day/week..............

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