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Joy Hope and Kindness

Joy a playful toy Over the hills played by a boy Yellow ball was his decoy Hope can you cope Over the long jump rope People many say nope Everyone will slid down the slope Kindness kids need to express In life without stress No one needs to be pressed Day and night they need to be blessed Never make a mess Each kid needs love and must not guess Say nice things~wear a halo headdress Sorry if this did not impress Date Written: 1/24/2022 Note: A Rhyme Acrostic Write. 1 Place Joy, Hope and kindness Contest Judged: 2/20/2022 Sponsored by: Angela Tune

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/1/2022 3:30:00 PM

Very nice acrostic poem, Paula…Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2022 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Acrostic one. Have a blessed day....................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/25/2022 11:24:00 AM

You chose 3 very special words for your acrostic, each one worth just as much as the other, your poem is so precious, all true my dear . Have a great day Paul :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2022 8:30:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Rhyme Acrostic write. You are so right, "each one worth just as much as the other." They are. Have a blessed day....................

Valsa George

Date: 1/24/2022 8:22:00 PM

Hi Paula, A beautifully composed Acrostic, musically rhyming and spreading love, hope and kindness !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2022 7:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this Rhyme Acrostic one. Have a blessed day.........

Judy Ball

Date: 1/24/2022 5:18:00 PM

A fine Acrostic with good advice for raising a well adjusted child. Kids learn what they live. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2022 7:39:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, "Kids learn what they live." So very true. Have a blessed day.........

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/24/2022 1:23:00 PM

Your acrostic is delightful! I especially love the way you created a trio Joy, Hope and Kindness~very clever. I enjoyed this immensely. Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2022 7:38:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my Rhyme Acrostic write. Have a blessed day.........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/24/2022 12:36:00 PM

Expertly crafted, Paula, I enjoyed reading this great poem. My very best regards

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2022 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day/week..............