Carole Duet Poet Free verse

Joy

What is this feeling?
My heart leaps when he speaks.
The beat quickens,
And inside I'm quivering.
The angels smile,
And cupid cheers,
"Joy!  Joy!  Joy!"
Love lives here.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2017
"All Rights Reserved"

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Paul Callus March 13, 2020 at 2:51 PM I notice that this poem was posted just ten days after Valentine's day....the feelings of romantic love must still be in the air, Carole! Lovely! ~ Regards // paul Carole Duet March 23, 2020 at 4:54 PM Yes, Paul, my "Joy" at that time (2017) was simply divine.Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. Carole :D

Robert Pettit March 10, 2017 at 6:44 PM If Johann Sebastian Bach were alive today, he would be inspired to write music after reading this short and sweet piece. Carole Duet March 10, 2017 at 6:58 PM Thank you so much, Robert, for such an inspiring comment. Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2017 at 3:54 PM this is very cute, Carole. AT first I thought it was for the pleiades contest and then realized you were simply doing a lovely free verse on JOY Carole Duet March 8, 2017 at 12:36 AM P.S. I don't write for contests. I just write and if it fits into a contest, I enter. Carole Duet March 8, 2017 at 12:27 AM Thank you, Andrea. I'll have to check out the contest...as soon as I find out what a "pleiades" is. lol

Arthur Vaso March 4, 2017 at 10:49 PM so sweet and beautiful Carole!! Carole Duet March 8, 2017 at 12:34 AM Thank you, Arthur. I'm glad you like it.

Darren White February 28, 2017 at 12:14 AM This is a lovely poem, it does indeed capture JOY, and the lovely picture that accompanies it is wonderful :) Carole Duet February 28, 2017 at 6:25 PM Thanks, Darren. I'm glad you liked it. It's easy when you feel "joyful"! Carole

Daniel Turner February 25, 2017 at 8:31 AM You better keep an eye on old cupid, he's not beyond shooting you with an arrow:) Love to see you happy, Carole:) Carole Duet February 25, 2017 at 9:18 PM Lol...I know!

White Wolf February 25, 2017 at 2:00 AM It's so good to see you doing free verse now! And like Andrea states, you have captures Joy itself! Carole Duet February 25, 2017 at 9:16 PM Joy captured me! ;)

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2017 at 10:40 PM so nice. you really captured JOY!! Carole Duet February 25, 2017 at 12:53 AM Thanks Andrea. That's because I "felt" it. :)

Carol B. February 24, 2017 at 8:46 PM Such an amazing feeling! Lovely to read this joyful poem. :) Carole Duet February 24, 2017 at 8:52 PM Thank you, Carol. Glad you like it! :)