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Joy

What is this feeling?
My heart leaps when he speaks.
The beat quickens,
And inside I'm quivering.
The angels smile,
And cupid cheers,
"Joy!  Joy!  Joy!"
Love lives here.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2017
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Paul Callus Date: 3/13/2020 2:51:00 PM I notice that this poem was posted just ten days after Valentine's day....the feelings of romantic love must still be in the air, Carole! Lovely! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/23/2020 4:54:00 PM Yes, Paul, my "Joy" at that time (2017) was simply divine.Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. Carole :D

Robert Pettit Date: 3/10/2017 6:44:00 PM If Johann Sebastian Bach were alive today, he would be inspired to write music after reading this short and sweet piece. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/10/2017 6:58:00 PM Thank you so much, Robert, for such an inspiring comment. Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2017 3:54:00 PM this is very cute, Carole. AT first I thought it was for the pleiades contest and then realized you were simply doing a lovely free verse on JOY Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/8/2017 12:36:00 AM P.S. I don't write for contests. I just write and if it fits into a contest, I enter. Carole Duet Date: 3/8/2017 12:27:00 AM Thank you, Andrea. I'll have to check out the contest...as soon as I find out what a "pleiades" is. lol

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/4/2017 10:49:00 PM so sweet and beautiful Carole!! Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/8/2017 12:34:00 AM Thank you, Arthur. I'm glad you like it.

Darren White Date: 2/28/2017 12:14:00 AM This is a lovely poem, it does indeed capture JOY, and the lovely picture that accompanies it is wonderful :) Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 2/28/2017 6:25:00 PM Thanks, Darren. I'm glad you liked it. It's easy when you feel "joyful"! Carole

Daniel Turner Date: 2/25/2017 8:31:00 AM You better keep an eye on old cupid, he's not beyond shooting you with an arrow:) Love to see you happy, Carole:) Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 2/25/2017 9:18:00 PM Lol...I know!

White Wolf Date: 2/25/2017 2:00:00 AM It's so good to see you doing free verse now! And like Andrea states, you have captures Joy itself! Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 2/25/2017 9:16:00 PM Joy captured me! ;)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/24/2017 10:40:00 PM so nice. you really captured JOY!! Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 2/25/2017 12:53:00 AM Thanks Andrea. That's because I "felt" it. :)

Carol B. Date: 2/24/2017 8:46:00 PM Such an amazing feeling! Lovely to read this joyful poem. :) Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 2/24/2017 8:52:00 PM Thank you, Carol. Glad you like it! :)