Jovial Evening

Wine for two,

I drink alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sohn Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Woah, this is simply genius. I'm beginning to understand the complexity behind several words. It's amazing. Congratulations!
Freeman Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations on your 2 win Raul. Sincere, Moses
Goff Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:48 AM
yes! I hear this beauty! CONGRATS RAUL! jimbo
Villarosa Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 11:48 PM
My congratulations to you Raul on placing 2nd on this contest. This is deserving. It is attracting participation, really a mind filling. (^_^) Noel.
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February 16, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations Raul, on your well deserved placement in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand with these imagination evoking words. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 8:38 AM
OH my, THIS one is GOOD. Congrats, Raul!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Raul, What great imagery in your lines....perfect Imagism poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Connie
Foster Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 6:55 PM
Aww! what a shame, stood up.:) I enjoyed the smile...Margaret
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February 11, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Kind of bummer for the one planning for two. Clever poem. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Karen
Fraser Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Kool Imagism Raul, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest >> James
Mcgovern Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Congrats on 2nd place. Based on what I have seen it must have been close. Mac
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Oh this is a true winner. Congratulations. Truly dramatic. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 8:25 AM
Congrats Raul on your winning poem and placement in Brian's Spaces Contest.. knew it was a winner first time I read it.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Richards Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Oh yes.....I thought this was a winner when I first read!! Congratulations dear Raul...this one creates such sad Valentine images! So well done, and wishing you good company to join you in a glass of wine! :)
Dufresne Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Raul, this is really good. I like it alot. congrats to you!
Clark Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 3:44 AM
Awesome Raul, It says so much!!!! Congratulations on your win!! Jeralynn
Brown Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Raul. Love, Carol
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February 11, 2010 at 2:31 AM
Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest, Raul. Very heartfelt and touching! Love, Carolyn
Kelly Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 1:55 AM
Sláinte , Raul and well done with your clever piece , Congrats ...
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 5:34 AM
OH NO.. I am imagining the missing line.. good luck if for Brian's Spaces contest.. your title keeps the reader wondering.. an interesting spin on the evening scene u have set.. enjoyed .. and intrigued by what u had in mind for the middle... luv.. Linda-Marie
Brown Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 8:43 AM
Wishing you the best in Brian's contest with this one should you enter it Raul. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM
Ouch....this is very painful, and heart wrenching. Well done!!! Good luck in the contest, Raul!!
Chircop Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 3:40 AM
Wine for two.Ow was it your date she let you down?Don't worry Raul,Wine for six next time,:)...Love this story..a good one indeed..Charma
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