Jovial Evening

Wine for two,

I drink alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/21/2010 9:42:00 PM
Woah, this is simply genius. I'm beginning to understand the complexity behind several words. It's amazing. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2010 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2 win Raul. Sincere, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2010 11:48:00 AM
yes! I hear this beauty! CONGRATS RAUL! jimbo
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Date: 2/16/2010 11:48:00 PM
My congratulations to you Raul on placing 2nd on this contest. This is deserving. It is attracting participation, really a mind filling. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations Raul, on your well deserved placement in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand with these imagination evoking words. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:38:00 AM
OH my, THIS one is GOOD. Congrats, Raul!!
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Date: 2/13/2010 4:30:00 AM
Raul, What great imagery in your lines....perfect Imagism poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Connie
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:55:00 PM
Aww! what a shame, stood up.:) I enjoyed the smile...Margaret
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:04:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Kind of bummer for the one planning for two. Clever poem. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Karen
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Date: 2/11/2010 1:12:00 PM
Kool Imagism Raul, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on 2nd place. Based on what I have seen it must have been close. Mac
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:26:00 AM
Oh this is a true winner. Congratulations. Truly dramatic. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2010 8:25:00 AM
Congrats Raul on your winning poem and placement in Brian's Spaces Contest.. knew it was a winner first time I read it.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:52:00 AM
Oh yes.....I thought this was a winner when I first read!! Congratulations dear Raul...this one creates such sad Valentine images! So well done, and wishing you good company to join you in a glass of wine! :)
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:52:00 AM
Raul, this is really good. I like it alot. congrats to you!
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:44:00 AM
Awesome Raul, It says so much!!!! Congratulations on your win!! Jeralynn
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest, Raul. Very heartfelt and touching! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2010 1:55:00 AM
Sláinte , Raul and well done with your clever piece , Congrats ...
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Date: 2/11/2010 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.
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Date: 2/10/2010 5:34:00 AM
OH NO.. I am imagining the missing line.. good luck if for Brian's Spaces contest.. your title keeps the reader wondering.. an interesting spin on the evening scene u have set.. enjoyed .. and intrigued by what u had in mind for the middle... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/9/2010 8:43:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Brian's contest with this one should you enter it Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2010 8:41:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/9/2010 8:20:00 AM
Ouch....this is very painful, and heart wrenching. Well done!!! Good luck in the contest, Raul!!
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Date: 2/9/2010 3:40:00 AM
Wine for two.Ow was it your date she let you down?Don't worry Raul,Wine for six next time,:)...Love this story..a good one indeed..Charma
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