Journey To Dzoku

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(Today a friend shared with me this new word - dzoku - discovered, apparently  with great joy, in the index of a  book of Tibetan Bon dzogchen. He thought it would make a great category label for our mutually shared 'madman happening poems' - "Dzoku Poetry - the seventh level of poetry". So I wrote him this poem in response. Then I went and did a search for this word, finding it's a hidden valley in India (Nagaland) which a trekking company offers tours to, and finding a poem published on Poetry Soup called "The Mystic Valley of Dzoku". Now I want to go trek in Dzoku and have joined Poetry Soup for life....)

Journey to Dzoku

The call of the cuckoo
rings out its simple reminder.
Clothed in its plain and ordinary form
it nonetheless with confidence proclaims;
“I am THAT!” 

That which is no other than this
bliss of suchness…
 
In this state of perfect rapture
the cuckoo sings, 
what no word can tell,
what no thought can hold,
and yet what everyone knows.

Wake up, wake up. 
Rejoice, you have no choice, but to carry on.

(for Mu’ncle - 9/3/23)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/5/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/5/2023 7:06:00 AM
Thank you - for the welcome and blessing!
Date: 9/5/2023 2:06:00 AM
There is no such thing as coincidence. The word, "pre-ordained" enters the fray. That word "dzoku", so many meanings...and a place of great deep beauty. Love it! I have read your first poem, here .... first. Absolutely, you must carry on. This is it, the journey. :)
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Date: 9/5/2023 7:13:00 AM
Yes, I agree. This one surprised me though. I really do want to go and hike there now.
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Date: 9/5/2023 7:13:00 AM
Yesterday looking at more google images of the Dzoku Valley I came across one of a steep ravine absolutely filled with colorful flowers and remembered seeing it on the internet and painting it (actually drawing with oil pastels) 12 and a half years ago when I was recovering from back surgery! Seems to me a delightful bit of serendipity this Dzoku/Poetry Soup thing!
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