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Journey Through Time's Long Blackened Maze

Journey Through Time's Long Blackened Maze Avoiding many pitfalls, I walked a narrow ledge a tramp searching for treasures that would heal empty soul since death had stolen so much had cast sorrows as ocean waves of grief as solemn shores of jagged glass bare feet commanded to walk in midnight pains Avoiding love as its costs were too, too high coward, wading desolation through canyons of despair where black-singing nights, ooze more cuts as ill-winds surround miseries and dreams of yesterdays before death's hand gripped the life of a beloved brother and friend Avoiding that crossroad, one that can save this soul renew joys of life, restoring Love, Truth and Heart forgiving myself, for my yet being alive forgiving myself, for life and going on forgiving myself, for not seeking death forgiving myself, for each sweet breath Avoiding many pitfalls, I walked a narrow ledge a tramp searching for treasures that would heal empty soul since death had stolen so much had cast sorrows as ocean waves of grief as solemn shores of jagged glass bare feet commanded to walk in midnight pains Free verse, 9-21-2019 written for SilentOne , Crossroads Contest

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Date: 9/24/2019 1:02:00 PM
Robert congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem !
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Date: 9/23/2019 11:15:00 AM
I don't know if it helps, Robert, but I learned [the hard way] almost 50 years ago that death is not a wall but a door, and so we may never loose anyone we have loved. Even knowing this may not lessen sorrow, for as I recall from a movie I saw once, grief is the tax we pay for love. Congrats on your win, my friend.
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Date: 9/23/2019 10:53:00 AM
powerful write, wonderfully penned, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 9/23/2019 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your TOP win, Robert with this poignant but splendid write.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/23/2019 10:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Always great when a contest idea so inspires me to splash ink and let the paper soak up its color, truth and lamentations.
Date: 9/23/2019 3:37:00 AM
- Really powerful lines, Robert - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/23/2019 10:45:00 AM
Thank you my friend. This one was a true joy to write and enter. My usual rhyming muse abandoned me, so I free versed it and saw the resulting creation was one to enter as was written-with no edits.
Date: 9/22/2019 8:51:00 PM
Dark yet lovely Robert. Congratulations on your well deserved Second Placement. I need to scurry over to read your latest. xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/23/2019 10:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a joy to compose for SilentOne's contests. And this one especially so as the subject matter so greatly inspire me to actually compose in free verse.
Date: 9/22/2019 5:22:00 PM
Great, Robert! Especially enjoyed the next to last verse. The emotion strong in these lines!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/23/2019 10:40:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Writing for this contest was a very gratifying and enjoyable time well spent.
Date: 9/22/2019 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/23/2019 10:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a great pleasure to write for your contests! And this one did so especially inspire me!
Date: 9/22/2019 10:17:00 AM
This is a great piece Robert! You do know how to bring out the tortured soul. I really love that last line and think it sums up everything but forgiving oneself for anything is something I need to learn.
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Date: 9/22/2019 1:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend. My having lived through so many sad events has given great fodder to this poetic soul to draw upon. Quite freeing to then let the ink soak the eager page and hope the readers enjoys to gift given.
Date: 9/22/2019 5:43:00 AM
This is emotional and deeply heartfelt, Robert. Only a true poet is capable of surviving the obstacles and pain which life has to offer. This is an excellent entry for the contest, my friend. a fav for me. Take care. Best regards // paul
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/22/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Having myself never written a lot of free verse poetry this one flowed from my inner being fairly quickly. As if pouring water from a boot. Composing on a life lived made it easier and letting heart speak gave great freedom.
Date: 9/21/2019 11:48:00 AM
Nice one Robert...I like the reader interaction on 3rd stanza...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/21/2019 1:24:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Please read my new blog , on the subject of my conclusion of my long three part Achilles series, that I am posting after giving these two replies . Always a joy to read your comments as well as your own great poetry.
Date: 9/21/2019 10:31:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem Robert, you write these so well ,indeed the master of dark verse. Hope you are keeping well. Greetings from Turkey. Tom.
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Date: 9/21/2019 1:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Please read my new blog , on the subject of my conclusion of my long three part Achilles series, that I am posting after giving these two replies .

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