Journey Through Time's Long Blackened Maze

Journey Through Time's Long Blackened Maze

Avoiding many pitfalls, I walked a narrow ledge
a tramp searching for treasures that would heal  
 empty soul since death had stolen so much
 had cast sorrows as ocean waves of grief
 as solemn shores of jagged glass
 bare feet commanded to walk in midnight pains

Avoiding love as its costs were too, too high
coward, wading desolation through canyons of despair
 where black-singing nights, ooze more cuts
 as ill-winds surround miseries and dreams
 of yesterdays before death's hand gripped
 the life of a beloved brother and friend 
 
Avoiding that crossroad, one that can save this soul
renew joys of life, restoring Love, Truth and Heart
 forgiving myself, for my yet being alive
 forgiving myself, for life and going on
 forgiving myself, for not seeking death
 forgiving myself, for each sweet breath 
 
Avoiding many pitfalls, I walked a narrow ledge
a tramp searching for treasures that would heal  
 empty soul since death had stolen so much
 had cast sorrows as ocean waves of grief
 as solemn shores of jagged glass
 bare feet commanded to walk in midnight pains
 
Free verse, 9-21-2019
written for SilentOne , Crossroads Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Robert congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem !
Carber Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 11:15 AM
I don't know if it helps, Robert, but I learned [the hard way] almost 50 years ago that death is not a wall but a door, and so we may never loose anyone we have loved. Even knowing this may not lessen sorrow, for as I recall from a movie I saw once, grief is the tax we pay for love. Congrats on your win, my friend.
Adams Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:53 AM
powerful write, wonderfully penned, congratulations on your win :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your TOP win, Robert with this poignant but splendid write.
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Thank you my friend. Always great when a contest idea so inspires me to splash ink and let the paper soak up its color, truth and lamentations.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 3:37 AM
- Really powerful lines, Robert - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Thank you my friend. This one was a true joy to write and enter. My usual rhyming muse abandoned me, so I free versed it and saw the resulting creation was one to enter as was written-with no edits.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:51 PM
Dark yet lovely Robert. Congratulations on your well deserved Second Placement. I need to scurry over to read your latest. xxoo
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a joy to compose for SilentOne's contests. And this one especially so as the subject matter so greatly inspire me to actually compose in free verse.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Great, Robert! Especially enjoyed the next to last verse. The emotion strong in these lines!
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Thank you my friend. Writing for this contest was a very gratifying and enjoyable time well spent.
One Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a great pleasure to write for your contests! And this one did so especially inspire me!
Swartz Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:17 AM
This is a great piece Robert! You do know how to bring out the tortured soul. I really love that last line and think it sums up everything but forgiving oneself for anything is something I need to learn.
Lindley Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 1:03 PM
Thank you my friend. My having lived through so many sad events has given great fodder to this poetic soul to draw upon. Quite freeing to then let the ink soak the eager page and hope the readers enjoys to gift given.
Callus Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 5:43 AM
This is emotional and deeply heartfelt, Robert. Only a true poet is capable of surviving the obstacles and pain which life has to offer. This is an excellent entry for the contest, my friend. a fav for me. Take care. Best regards // paul
Lindley Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Having myself never written a lot of free verse poetry this one flowed from my inner being fairly quickly. As if pouring water from a boot. Composing on a life lived made it easier and letting heart speak gave great freedom.
Michael Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Nice one Robert...I like the reader interaction on 3rd stanza...
Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Thank you my friend. Please read my new blog , on the subject of my conclusion of my long three part Achilles series, that I am posting after giving these two replies . Always a joy to read your comments as well as your own great poetry.
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Enjoyed your poem Robert, you write these so well ,indeed the master of dark verse. Hope you are keeping well. Greetings from Turkey. Tom.
Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Thank you my friend. Please read my new blog , on the subject of my conclusion of my long three part Achilles series, that I am posting after giving these two replies .
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